Well, you've got a good begining. Are you going to finish or leave it there?

I'm loving the story! Please update soon! :D

What happens next?

GAH! Update! Please! this is a brilliant story, and you chose to leave off at such a lovely part... can't wait for the next chapter, which will sure to be full of goodies :)

Oh, how utterly romantic! I could not help but smile through the entire four chapters. You have captured a certain sweetness that many others have not. I wish that I could give some helpful input, but all I can say is please, please continue with this story.

please write more i love this story!!

I really liked the agressive Sarah and even more that she admitted it was simply her being bold and act, but at the same time making it not an act. (Did that make any sense at all?) Anyways... nice!

i like it, it is so cute.

Oh... Please tell me there is more!
Update soon. ^_^

Excellent! I love it, and I don't know what else to say except please update soon, I'm looking forward to reading this.

Your story is great! Please write more soon!

Oh my GOd!! your fic is so great, I love it, pleasee continue I love Jareth/Sarah fanfics.
I'm from Mexico and let me say that your fic is one of my favourits ok? see you ADIOS (bye)

hi *waves* so far I just read the 1st chapter but I like it, not to sound cocky or mean or whatever but I dont leave reviews on most stories I read do to the fact that they always have alot, this story didn't have any so I thought that I would leave one, because I know that your taking time on writing this and posting it atleast we could do is tell you we like it. so I like it so far its something new yay.