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PS: i still like this story

I just finished reading the story. It was amazing, but there were some places where I could see why you were getting annoyed with it. While I enjoyed the story, I feel that the ending was a little morbid and kind of harsh. I personally hope Harry lives and obviously you do, too, or you wouldn't have ended your story like this (although I have already read book 7, but was hoping this before I read the book).

wow i just got finished reading this and it was amazing! you should definately write another long hp story

Lol , I reviewed a few months ago saying something about not reading it all, so today I tried reaaly hard to read it, but I just dont have the patience!

Lol .. but what I did read (up to chapter 7 and the last 3 chapters :O) , I gotta say - its good stuff.No, GREAT stuff! XD awesome.And in all honestly, a lot better than J.K Rowlings! The Deathly Hallows lacked everything you have in your story, more detail in the characters and .. just heaps of stuff.

Cant beleive you wrote that all, I cant be assed finishing any of my fics haha- too damn lazy! Oh well, great fics, man..you're really (in my opinion]) one of the very best writers on FanFiction ]

I luv your Digimon stories as well .

Btw .. Please update Ever After!

you rock! ]

-Mary

I thought that this story was great. It was really morbid, though. The ending was surprisingly sad. I wish Mrs Weasley or at least McGonagall had survived. Oh well, can't have everything. Still, it was a good story.

Pinkdigi-

(Don't be creeped out-yes, my login name is Mrs. McCartney, but I'm 17 years old, not 50!) Your story, Just Going With It, a Harry Potter Fanfic, was amazing! I would have wrote you a review every chapter, but I couldn't stop-I finished it in two days. I can't believe you were only thirteen when you wrote the first chapter. Thank goodness I found your story after you had finished it, because I would had drivin myself crazy waiting for you to make the next chapter available! And the little comments you made at the top of the page personalized it, and also reminded me that you weren't J.K. Rowling. (I always felt like you were!) I am sorry for your losses by the way. Were they friends or relatives? It almost seemed like you channeled your feelings of loss for them into the story. (Sorry if that sounded wishy-washy, but it's true) You definitly have a gift. I was so suprised at how well you were able to make the characters act just like they would in the book, even when the scenes you wrote had nothing to be compaired to. And although you kept the personalities of the characters, as I read along, I wanted the characters to do the exact same things you did! I hope this is the kind of review you're looking for, and I also hope that even though you finished your story a while ago, that you will still read this, and maybe even write back? If not, thank you anyways for an amazing story.

I'm usually not a big fan of close-to-canon sories, but this one was indeed worth it. Great job...

amazing i cant believe you were only fifteen when you wrote this and i loved the ending the way it wasnt completely complete yet it was the trio made plus ginny and that was all they really wanted i mean its sad that every body else died but the four of them is all that really mattered right

Your story is really awesome, I like it and most of the twists and truns. You really did a grat job.

Only the end was kind of sad and I didn't like it as much as the rest of the story, but that is because I really like happy end stories; sorry my personal fault;-)

great job really

Merlyn

I just wanted to say that you are amazing.

This story has taken me on a emotional rollarcoaster.

Its made me laugh made me cry made me happy made me sad.

I can't help it. You're just amazing.

I normally wait till the end of a story to write a review.

I just couldn't wait.

Thankyou

You hoped that Harry would die in DH? Why would Rowling have the main character die, its sounds like something Lemony Snicket would write.

i absolutley loved that story except for the ending. i HATED it. Harry's going to have a piece of evil in him forever? and everybody besides the four of them died? i was a bit - no...very disappointed. but other than that it was fantastic!

Honestly I couldnt read it all lol.

But I read as much as I can..and the last few chapters and I can say that this story is AMAZING your a great writer..and we're like the same age nearly,..( useless information) but your such a good writer.

Honestly and I LOVE YOUR WORK !

Specially , ONY and One Month and Ever After.

i know you finished writing this story half a year ago. but i discovered it two months ago. it took me two months to read. well..not read it. because i got bored in the middle. it's just that it was a LOT of harry ang ginny. and i like that item fine, but i prefer a lot more hermione and ron. and it was a lot of the story writen from harry's point of view. and i must say i've stand enough of that character during the seven books (which i read during november '07, december '07 and january '08- i don't know how the hell have you been abe to wait so long for each book to be published). i don't know if you will ever read this review..but i just wanted to tell you that you're a very good writer. a lot of imagination you have. and you're only 15. it's amazing. it's just that it was not one of my favourite fics but not because of how you write, but because i don't like harry being the center of the attention. being always the "hero"...i don't know. it's very uncommon for me to like main characters in books and series...i think secondary characters are the best. they don't "try" to get all the attention from the plot. you know? lol

excellent writer. keep on doing like this and you'll get veryvery far. consider it as a career please? )

bye!

p.s.: sorry about my spelling/grammar mistakes. english is not my language. it's spanish..so..oh! and sorry for this VERY LONG review, bye!

IS RON DEAD OR NOT? IT'S DRIVING ME CRAZY!