This is a good series but I am sad to see it on hold, will you be getting back to it anytime soon?

david

Ok nice story like it hope it goses on was sorry you killed off bella I like her paired with harry. Hope you keep this story going.

I hope you don't you don't mind me pointing out a rather annoying flaugh I've noticed in your writing. If you don't want to know then just delete this review right now.


Ok, if your reading this then you don't mind me telling you. You double a lot of things. I don't remember the exact sentence, but some where in here you said "then... ... then." I noticed a lot in this story as well as your other one that predates this one, but I didn't get a chance to say anything. Other than that I must say this is one of my more enjoyed fanfictions. Thanks for writing it.

good story so far so update soon and keep writing its great.

When I read your listing of powers Harry had I was wondering how he can change his appearance without the Chameleon belt? Does he have Metamorphagus powers? Oh did you display that with Tonks yet? Can he do wandless magic yet?

Wow. This tale has a lot of stuff in it that could make it truly an epic. Oh I hope we learn more about Satana.

Quite the twist at the end. You are a fascinating writer. I like that Harry has so many people around him that care for him. I hope we get to see him treat all of them nicely. Or at least not do anything to alienate them from him. I guess I just want them all to be happy with each other. Oh man I'm excited for when Harry tries to get Draco on his side. Oh yea and its very interesting to read about things that have appeared in your other fics. Like Don the Dream Master. I wonder if he will become a problem later.

Aww. I wish Harry could have had his whole order there to celebrate Christmas. He could have given Snape a present! I hope there will be some positive interaction between the two later.

Could you describe what Lord Ragnarok looks like? I don't recall a description.

good fic./.. hope this thing is still on

like the way the story is going and hope you continue it

Not bad. But I'm starting to have a headache with the split personality. Ragnarok\Harry, Shakira\Tonks! Mercy. Anyway good work so far and you could please try to update soon.

*sighs* comma's. you need them. i honestly dunno why so many authors refuse to put them. perhaps your all just lazy. that it? really, its not that difficult to put comma's.

WRONG- “Let him be for now” Lilly said in a motherly way “he just needs time to himself.”

RIGHT- “Let him be for now,” Lily said in a motherly way. “He just needs time to himself.”

see? not hard at all. please put comma's next time.

When Harry uses the Necroquicken spell does he absorb their magical core and add it to his?

Great stuff.