OH MY GOD! This is absolutely stunning. So very well written, raw and could still be kinda in canon, even with the seventh book now. Well done. Love it.

love it, i hope u cud make this into a long story theres so much u cud do to it

This is very very good. A little gem.

You will be continuing this story, I hope? Please?

Hey good beginning, you gonna continue? Constructive critiscism (not rele but i know ppl like that sorta thing :D) I like the way you right the convo in this, not at all stilted :P

This is really amazing. I could read it a thousand times and never get bored, and it would never lose its magic. And when Severus cries...usually, I am just disappointed in a story when he cries, because he is way out of character, but in your story, it doesn't seem that way. You did that, and everything else, very well.

Wonderful story. It brought tears to my eyes, and captured my heart. I really enjoyed it.

wow this is wonderful.
Do you intend to continue into a story or shall it relin a one-shot?
Can she open Severus a path back to the order and to a perspective for life?

This is good, I was so sad when I finished HBP, I do not believe that Severus Snape would kill Dumbledore if not order by the man himself. Your story is a very likely explanation, that has SSHG, I can't really stand HGRW. I hope this is not a one-shot, please continue, I've added it to my fav. story, :) so, your are oblige to continue, :P

I do think this story has excellent potential; I hope you continue it beyond this chapter, although I can see how it could be complete as a one-shot. Still, your portrayal of them both is so good, I hope you consider continuing the story.

This is excellent! It is exactly what I thought happenend. I even imagined Hermione figuring the whole thing out and trying to contact Snape. Your version is great. Please continue!

Wow! More, more, more... This story has great potential! I can't wait to see what comes next! Plaese, update soon! Coting a great wizard: "Jessica... Please!" :)

is there more?

This is such a beautiful fic. I really felt sad for Severus in it, and I got into the emotion of it all. It did seem to move a little quickly, but under the circumstances in which Hermione found him, I suppose it could be plausible. Please keep writing this. I want to read more.

Well i like your story. It gives dumbledore's death a meaning. Kinda like there's always a meaning to anyone's madness. So keep writing. or atleast write another great story like this in the near future.