Beautiful, as always. I believe your series of dragonlance is the best fanfic I've ever read of the books. I love Raistlin and I love slash... what more needs to be said?

I can't wait to read the rest!! :)
Specially the part when Raistlin finally tells Dalamar what the big secret was... and receives his black robes, of course. That'll be entertaining :)

Again, a magnificent story. The series becomes even more interesting.

Also, this one was delightfully long. I love it when a good story is long, otherwise it ends too soon (I´m a very greedy reader).

Wonderful! I love the way you follow the original storyline from a different perspective and adding your own slight deviations- making it all the more interesting. The interaction between the characters is truly believable, especially Raistlin and Dalamar's relationship. I go to read the next installments!

great, im so glad that someone agrees with me in the need for sturm the solomnic idiot to die (im so glad about that part of winter night). i like the thing about the wedding, that would be funny, to see who would show up besides the obvious caramon...also, i cant wait for ur take on the legends since thats when dalamar really comes in. it should b awesome knowing ur writing.

I love this final chapter, the way they all pretend that nothing else than their happiness exists. I am eagerly waiting for the next story.

This ending is great, after all the pain and the anger and the nostalgy there comes a little peace and hope for Dalamar's heart.

You alter the story by little touches, making it all the more interesting to read. You give a whole new depth to some passages of the story. When I first read the books I couldn't careless about their coming to Qualinesti, but now with Dalamar full of pain and sadness it is much more interesting that Tanis being reunited with his childhood girlfriend.
Thank you for writing this.

I love the way you show us at the same time our two lovers being so cute to each other and one second later they swear to make everyone pay and grovel at their feet...

I think my love for your story will never end ! I'm at awe how every single gesture is just so Raistlinish or Dalamarish, and Godess, they are so cute together !

Ah ! Tanis' so typical look of melancholy ! How I missed it... or not.

Oh, what a first chapter ! I just can't find the words to tell you how this sounded so right. Well, now I'll be on my marry way to chapter 2.

I really like this series of yours; it is one of the few good R/D fics I have seen. I like the way you write the characters and am curious to see how you'll manage the events in Legends, once the storyline gets that far. Anyway, great work and I'm looking forward to more.

*waves arms* Hey, I'd go Raist and Dal's wedding. Actually, I imagine a lot of fans would show up uninvited. Our two favorite mages would probably incinerate all the guests, ultimately. Hmm.

I especially liked the last line: "Around them, the trees whispered." It seems to foreshadow, to me, the upcoming excursion into the Silvanesti lands. Plus, it has an interesting, cold and mysterious contrast with the above warm paragraph. Nice wordcraft!

Well, a great end to a great fic, and I can't wait for the beginning of the next installment! I'm really eager to find out how Raist and Dal's relationship plays out in conjunction with the War. *dances* Love it! Want more!

~Tsukiyo

(Gah, I'm a chapter behind!) Anyway, this chapter kicks some serious **! First: MAGES IN DRAG! I award you one hundred bonus points for Dal in a dress. Then there's the stunning revelation of Eben's bribe, which throws Raist and Dal's strange relationship into more stark contrasts. Le sigh - there are Issues to be dealt with even in Tru Luv.

I loved the final showdown with Verminaard. Dal adds so much meaning to Our Heroes ganging up on the cleric. For some reason, I never fully understood Raistlin's "score to settle" in the books, unless it was Eben's third-grader nasty comments. Your story makes more sense. Raist actually has something meaningful to fight for. Nice work. More bonus points for making me happy.

Oh, one chapter left? Then I'm off to read and review. ^_^

~Tsukiyo

Great ending. I liked the dry humor in this chapter. And I too am greatly looking forward to Legends. It was my favorite in the original series, and I'm really looking forward to getting your take on it.