Was this like a birthday present for Sasuke, too? Anyway, this is really nice :) Thank you for writing this, it made my day :)

(T^T) poor sasuke
but the relationship is so bittersweet
nice fic
thanx

o...thts sadly cute

aww..
very sad.
good fic, though. :)

I really liked that. I feel bad for Sasuke, but I liked it nonetheless

so good, it made me think back to those days when i was young and the world seem just a litle bit better. Peacefull, full of brightness and hope.

*claps* Very nice!

XD asome story I thought it would have been a happy ending but it was asome as you can tell by my pen name I love NaruSasu XD

AHH! I REALLY THOUGHT THERE WOULD BE A HAPPY ENDING!
-sniffles- how sad! i liked this though!

Very bittersweet...well-written...I really like it...but I still almost wish for a happier ending...

Awuh. That's sweet. Poor Sasu-kun. ^__^

Great use of the gold metaphor!! xD That was super awesome! :D

wow that... was so moving yah
Really good yah
maybe have a epilouge or something yah?

saw the link to this from sasuxnaru community
this is omnikaze from lj too yes yes
love your work on this ficcie short but good yah
well detailed yah
Doesn't seem too be any grammer mistakes yah
I'll give you a cyber cookie!
*hands hoshiki a cookie*

Beautifully written- your vivid description paints such a clear picture... I could almost see this happening in the manga >D Well done. Special kudos goes to the last line- it was so haunting, symbolic, and foreshadowing... but alas, I shall end this (spew) review here, before it drags further down the depths of incoherency... (Wow. I spoke excellent engrish, yes me does.)

That was such a sweet story! ^^ I really liked it. Keep up the good work!

nice story so cute!