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Reviews For: Dirty Laundry

Goddess of Idun
2005-08-02
ch 1,
abuseoh... dirty.
elvencherry07
2005-07-21
ch 1,
abuseHaha, very cute. Of course Remus isn't straight. Pft.
King Harold
2005-07-21
ch 1,
abuseWOOHOO! Awesome. I loved that comment "I liked the table" It cracked me up! And Sirius freaking out over the washing machine! *sniggers* I quite like. *approves* *hands a cookie* In fact, I'm going to put you on my favorites list! *adds to favorites list*
soap
2005-07-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseYay! Just the thing after the...um...surprise of HBP. So cute ;)
wantstoshaglupin
2005-07-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseThank you for being my hero of the day! Not only was the story cute, but the dedication was priceless! I really truly needed that laugh!
Atavaka
2005-07-20
ch 1,
abuseDo I detect a sense of bitterness in this story? It couldn't possibly be the author's notation regarding her feelings for Remus's sexual orientation...

Anyways, it's pretty good. Funny at least, even if this particular pairing isn't as plausible as it used to be. Good job Adhara... glad to see you writing again after such an incredibly-long hiatus.
PadfootsMoony
2005-07-20
ch 1,
abuseAbsolutely delicious. I agree with Shy Wolf Under a Pale Ice Moon -- should have kept the machine on. ;-)
Sehrai
2005-07-20
ch 1,
abuseVery, very interesting but next time I'd try turning the machine on. The comments on sorting colors makes me wonder if you've done this chore before. If you have, HELP! What color goes where? Just kidding, my mom does my laundry for me.
But no kidding about your writing style. It is humorous, and great joy to read. Your characters are focused, and active. Your wording is confident, yet clear.
Also, I agree with Khajiit. J.K must be smokin' something.
Khajiit
2005-07-20
ch 1,
abuseLMAO! You finally finished it! Nice one. That's exactly what I would have thought Sirius would do in a situation like that. Also, a heterosexual Remus? Pfft! That woman must be on crack. Keep them coming Adhara1.
Mistress of Muses
2005-07-20
ch 1,
abuseCute. Short and sweet, I liked it muchly!
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