Hey, nice fic. It's one of the first I've read where Hawk seems really in character. Please update!

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I am guessing they live on an island? Another tear jerker...I hope that Daniel doesn't hold any animosity towards him, they were very close in the show, but this is fanfic and anything is possible. Looking forward to the next chapter...Happy writing!

OMG this story is soo sad and soo good!
ive been menaing to read it for some time now
ur doing a fantastic job!

Wow! That was an amazing chapter. It was very intense But I ABSOLUTELY LOVE it! Please update soon! Thanks. :)

Elle that is so sad!! It's almost like Mel is some sort of re-incarnation of Caroline. Really look forward to seeing how this turns out-please make this a long story:-)

Boy is that a tear jerker...I can't think of who she is supposed to remind him of, the only straws I can grasp at are either Hotlips or that chick he was engaged to back in the States...Keep up the good work and happy writing!

I'm really enjoying this story so very much. I'm looking forward to seeing how Mel copes with the reality of this all. I also want to thank you for writing in Father Mulcahy for me. It's an honor to read something with your favorite character in it. Thank you again and keep on writing.

Am really enjoying this story but just as I was getting into chapter three -phut!!-it was over!! Ell - please don't keep us in suspense too long,this promises to be a real good one. Look forward to seeing how the good Father fits in to it all. Am I right in thinking Mel reminds Hawkeye of Carly?

Aw... thst brought tesrs to my eyes but its very sweet. I like the way Hawkeye's caring for here. Its very sweet. Please update really soon. I wanna know what happens. Thanks!:)

Hawkeye cries? Yeah, work's really gotta be getting to him, otherwise he'd play it off. Keep the story coming.
Hope you had fun on you're trip.

WOW! I really like it alot! I think its WONDERFUL! Please update soon and Have fun on your trip!!:)

What a wonderful well thought out story.I'm enjoying it very much.

Intriguing start, very dramatic. I look forward to reading more!

I like the chapter. You wrote Hawkeye really well. Hope that she wakes up and Sydney gets to visit too! Happy writing!

This is wonderful, I would love to read more, you have the characters mannerisms down, but I'm sure Potter would have sent Klinger or another corpsman for help along w/BJ and Hawkeye.