Very well written. I liked how you made Snapes loyalities uncertain.

Clap your hands; believe in Severus Snape! Show your support!

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wow you re good...to be able to ptu a bit of a joke in the sad fic you did!

very great work!

Interesting story, with really great Imagery! The only thing that caught me off guard was that I couldnt determine which side Snape was on...but I guess I'm actually supposed to think about it..huh? lol. Anyway, it was well written.

..oh and also one more thing...I just thought you might want to put in the summary that there are HPB spoilers because although I (and most other people) have finished the novel, one look at the summary and you find out who dies! just a thought :)

The story can be left here, but I'd love it if you expanded!

Happy Writing.

Nuanced and thoughtful. I disagree with your take on the events (I still think Snape's trying to defeat Voldemort) but you've written it convincingly.