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| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-06-21 ch 5, | abuseA great end to the story. I liked the part where Gil was reading to Nick about the Mexican fruit fly larvae. |
| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-06-21 ch 4, | abuseAnother great chapter. I liked the part where Greg was sitting with Nick. |
| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-06-21 ch 3, | abuseAnother great chapter. I liked that scene in Grave Danger. When I first saw the episode, I thought that scene was real, but once I saw that it wasn't, it was really funny. |
| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-06-21 ch 2, | abuseAnother great chapter. I liked the part where Catherine was comforting Nick after his nightmare. |
| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abuseA great start to the story. I liked the part where Nick and Warrick were talking about what had happened. |
| Quill-32 2007-10-04 ch 6, | abuseI think what I love most about this story is that first, Nick is in character, and second that Grissom is the one who knows how to talk to him, just as he's the one to get Nick out of the hole. Plus, it's great to see everyone being friends again! A terrific, heartachy story. |
| Kris 2006-03-14 ch 6, anon. | abuseThis was like wow. It totally blew my socks off and I dont usually even look twice at this sort of story let aone like it! I reckon you should sell it the dudes that run the show and make 'em buy it off you. |
| Nicole Stokes 2005-10-03 ch 6, anon. | abuseWow. I'm very shocked you haven't got any more reviews. The story if very well written and very well thought out. Good job! Nicole Stokes |
| bluemoon5 2005-09-04 ch 6, | abuseGood story. I liked it. The premise for the story was interesting and you did a pretty good job of portraying the characters. |
| Onigami Nanashi 2005-08-28 ch 6, | abuseAw... That was so sweet! I love it. Poor Nicky... At least he could sleep with the rest of the team sleeping with him. I love the fruit fly lecture and curing insomnia. E!! |
| M 2005-08-28 ch 6, anon. | abuseI really enjoyed this idea - which is something, 'cos a lot of the times writer's of fanfic don't tend to capture the characters. I could envision the characters in many of the scenes, but I still think that it would be possible to further develop them. At times I heard them say stuff in ways that didn't sound right, but for the most part I was hearing the people that I've come to let in my house each week via the TV. Good job! Especially loved the last chapter where they all turned up at Nick's. |
| ellennar 2005-08-24 ch 6, | abuseI must confess I just discovered CSI (yes, I do live under a rock why to you ask?) and haven't seen the episode that inspired this yet but I enjoyed your writing very much all the same. Poor Nick!! |
| NothingButSarah 2005-08-22 ch 6, | abuseHey there, that was a great end to the story, i really think you did a great job!! Thanks for posting!! |
| BashirXena 2005-08-18 ch 6, | abuseI'm crying! It was just so warm and gushy and vomit worthy. I loved it! |
| higherbeingfriendsfan 2005-08-18 ch 6, | abuseAww I loved this chapter, it was great. It was so sweet of everyone to come to his house, although I never doubted they would leave Nick alone in his house for the first time. I felt sorry for Grissom when it said that he knew they would tease him, bless Grissom. At least he was partly able to get Nick to fall asleep with his lecture lol. A perfect ending for a fantastic fic! |