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Lynny M
2005-07-22 . chapter 2
*blushes furiously* Goodness! What an honor this chapter is ^_^

Good go, as usual. I loved Tima's question: "When I die, will you miss me, too?" That was dep, and creepy.

Nope, there's no mention of Tima's mother in the movie, so no worries there. I, in fact, have no need to consider her. The Duke seems supplement enough, lol! Isn't that strange?

Perhaps she died in childbirth?

Many thanks. *claps*
Lynny M
2005-07-20 . chapter 1
*claps long and hard*

Good, very good, as they have been. It was a pleasant transition from the stories I have reviewed from you in the past (not saying that those were not enjoyable, of course), from painful things to this rather nice thing.

I like the Duke, like him very well, and as I'm sure you can tell I am a firm believer in his role as a loving father. This piece, whether speaking of a past-life Tima or a 'puppet' Tima, showed just that, and very well. I enjoyed it immensely. I look forward to future works.

Lynny M
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