OMG! STARS WARS! I saw that movie with my freinds and me and Steph were gripping each other the whole time yelling either,
"NO! NOT HIM!" or "DON'T DO IT ANIKAN!" I just wanted to die by the end of it it was so sad... but I really dident want to see Anikan burning alive.
and at the end of the movie when Anikan asked,
"Pamaid, is she alive?"
and that evil sith lord *gr want to kill him* said,
"No my apprentice, you killed her." and then Anikan was all,
"NO!" I was crying by the end of it all.
it was all so sad, I think I had a head ach by the end of it all by crying and yelling so hard.
I think the other people in the thearter were mad at me and Steph for yelling like that but hey we loved it!
ANYWAYS> back to you're story. brilliant if I do say so myself. one of the best!
Sorry for carrying on like that... but Star Wars was like brilliant.

ANYWAYS, update soon

Sara

I don't think you're all that much in need of a beta; mistakes were few and far between, and you were able to capture the spirit of the Hogwarts years well. Still, why in the world would your best friend refuse to beta Harry Potter? :-)

Sappy's not a problem ... way to ratchet up the tension - I can't to see what his plan is.

Wow! That was so descriptive I actually shivered a little, and it's 86 degrees here! Very good writing.

fluff is always good! lol. good story!

yes yes fluff is good. *sighs* I'm so bord, I with my mother would just let me go on vacation...

this is good update soon plz

oh I loved it! I hope you continue it soon! It was really good and I wish there was more! well I must be off! very hot here and I'm going swimming!