Missing quotation marks. missing paragraph breaks. Difficult to tell the person talking changed. But story is good, please finish it. Will email you. Have an idea.

"What do you mean, what did you do to him." I said pointing to Ax's unconscious body lying on the floor. I stunned him, it was quite easy his being an unshielded mind I could easily disrupt it. he said.

Following needs an exclamation point and quotation marks.

Fascinating. Ax said. My people would benefit greatly from such a device.

Need paragraph breaks between different characters speaking dialog. Tat is a grammar rule and for a reason. Way you did it; different characters speaking to each other in same paragraph makes it hard to determine who is speaking.

But the story itself is quite good!

Oh I did have it backwards in last chapter. Sorry!

Wow that was easy! a few Kromags that get through the gate manage to take control of the Yeerks the Animmorphs have been battling for years that quickly? How did they even find out about them that quickly? Not like the parasitic Yeerks announce their presence! or is this a trick and the Yeerks really have the Kro-mags which seems more likely.

Holding my interest very nicely!

Following needs to be needs to be where not were.

Yeerk Pool when we don't know were it is?

Good start so far. Thanks for saving one of mine to favorites! :-) God should be capitalized. Being used as a name. Earth probably should too. It's a place.

Some of it is kind of confusing because it's all clumped together but I like the idea.

Interesting idea...

I loved the Sliders series, and I do love the Animorphs books.

You're blending them quite well... though I see it's been almost a year since your last update, I hope that you intend to finish this great fic.

facinting i like it

The Porfessor wouldn;t be telling a stor they had all experienced.

Well, that can't be good... Continue, please...

This should be intersting. Imagine what would happen if Ax actually was able to help them repair the timer... wow. I am surprised that the Yeerks just let them go in the last chapter, however, Yeerks are pretty much backstabbers. Oh well, though, I would like to see what happens next.

Uh-oh, they're in trouble. What's going to happen to Quinn and the others? Will the Animorphs save them? What will Ax think if he analyzes the timer?

You might want to start spacing out your paragraphs a little more, so it's easier to read. Other than that, please update soon!

I think this is a very interesting idea, although it could be a little more developed and detailed. Also, you might want to space out your paragraphs by starting a new one each time someone else starts talking. But I like Sliders and Animorphs, so I enjoyed this story!