I agree. I wanna kill Duke too. Nice chapter, but the German's a bit inaccurate, you've got "I want your to paper in at three minutes". "Papieren" means "papers" too, but not as in "essay". Try "Ich will deinen Aufsatz in drei Minuten". Oh, lol, and "emo" in German is the same as in English, but they pronounce it "eh-mow" tehe, I didn't dare ask what "chav" was! Keep it up!

duke is such a loser -.-'
But still love your FF
Update VERY VERY soon
Bye

poor serenity. she doesn't deserve a player like duke.

Please continue soon...

Well, Serenity was being naive... And about killing Duke - don't worry, we all want to do that (I finally managed it, yay!)
Anyway good update.
Bye,
SP

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Yesh! now all we need is Seto back and we'll make something happen. :D
poor serenity. Dukes such a **. Mai should kick him a few more times. :]

Omigosh! 0.o Poor serenity... Maybe Kaiba will do something about this situation and they shall reunite again. *laughs* Hope to see you Update SOON! ^^

Yes, I do want to kill Duke. but you had to make serenity hate him somehow, so that she would end up with kaiba. ^^ update

Well, at least Seto has a chance! That's if it doesn't him long to recongize that Serenity, hopefully, has feelings for him. Duke is such an **!
SxS ATF~!~

T_T Bring them back together! They were meant for each other!

Hey
Your Ff is great!! (what else can I say?)
Update VERY soon!
Bye

o.O That certainly is a lot of "Ahhs!" and this chapter explains "Ah!". Is Seto actually crying by the window? o.O And Serenity... needs to get away from Duke instantly.
Now, since Serenity is at the park, I hope Seto does pass by there, gets out of his limo, and hugs her. ^.^
SxS ATF~!~

A few quick things to point out. Those "ahh!"s are going off the page. You need to capitalize beginnings of "" sentences. And it's a "hole" in her heart. Yeah, sorry for criticizing you so much. But you are my friend. So I shall be harsh.

But nice chapter, I can imagine the whole movie incident ^^ update!

Oh... Poor Serenity!
But Seto really could have said bye at least... grr... stubborn idiot...
Anyway, nice chapter, only a bit short. Otherwise, well done, and I'm looking forward to your next update.
Bye,
SP

The rant at the first part of the story was super funny!Keep writing, and update sometimes.