Man, I need to just start fishing for fics under your name because you have these bomb ass stories that's been here and for some reason I haven't seen them... My friend Desiree is debating whether she should become an author here or not.

Like most poetry, takes a few reads to understand it. It was confusing for me though. Oh well, the error was probably on my part.

that was nice .

Wow! 0_0 that's a good poem! You seriously become a writer!

AWESOME! Great job! I'm serious! I can soooooo see this working for either Kenji or Uriko! Maybe even Long or Jane... _ You're a great poetry writer, Christi! I loved the imagery in this poem. And the emotions! Boy, could I feel those as I read it! I wish you would write more poetry! Man, if only I could write as well as you! You're awesome! And the detail you can get using only a few words! I wish I could do that. You have a way with discription. My thing is being succint. _ I need to take a page out of your book! Hey, you should try to write a non-Bloody Roar fic and try to get it published. I know you love BR, but the only way your fics could be published then is over the net. I seriously think you should try to get stuff published in books and stuff. A novel, maybe a book of poems and short stories, it's just an idea. Don't hurt me! _

How lovely! I hope you make more. And you say you stink! Your so wrong! Your great to the contrair. (sharpens his Katana). You better believe yourself or I'll have to change your mind about it! j/k! Your great even when you think you aren't! Kenji and Uriko were deep in this one. KENIKO RULEZ! Great work and stop dobting yourself. Keep up the great work!

Awww...that's just so cute! It's really sweet how their feelings for each other are "hidden"...it's kinda bittersweet too, knowing that Uriko loves Kenji and Kenji loves Uriko, but the other doesn't know...I'm still learning about Bloody Roar (from you, of course _), so I can't tell yet which lines are Uriko's and which lines are Kenji's. But, through you, I'm hopeful that I can find out someday! Keep writing, Christi, and you can bet that I'll keep reading. _

Stop lygn to yurself! you do good poems! ::shivers from, evil cold thunderstorm:: good job!

Another great poem! This one was done from two points of views huh? Well, guess I'll read it again to figure out which is which. I don't mind reading something worth my time twice!_ I'm sure it will be easy to figure out. Alot of what the couple thought was very sweet! Kenji is obviously the one having problems saying "the words"!O_O lol He'll come around eventually.

He can't hold back his feelings from Uriko forever!_ Excellent poem Christi!