that was so(tear)sad... you can't help, but...but...but...CRY!wa! i like chiriko and it was sad that he died! but that was good, but if you could make the poem more vivid in the reader's mind, then you have it made!

Aritaka619

Oh, Chiriko is so... kawaii! But that is really sad. Poor kid... that was really good, much better than I can do(I don't know if you can take that as a compliment, but, uh...ok) Why did Chiriko have to kill himself? It's not fair! Mibaka's not worth his death! Wahhh! (please don't mind me!) I really liked the part with Nuriko, though, cuz they doth rock! Oh, well... Bye!

*applauds* ::pedestrian monotone:: congratulations, you are awarded with writing the first ever Chiriko poem ::happy tone:: THAT ACTUALLY RHYMED! WOW! keep up the spectacular work - *wipes away a tear* so powerful!

You know, I really love your writing. I mena, I REALLY do. You write the best ever Chiriko fanfics, and you do it with such dignity! PLEASE keep going, I LOOOOOOOOOOOVE your writing! Emily

You know, I really love your writing. I mena, I REALLY do. You write the best ever Chiriko fanfics, and you do it with such dignity! PLEASE keep going, I LOOOOOOOOOOOVE your writing! Emily

That was a really neat poem, I liked it. Chiriko rocks! _

Ack! I go looking for happier (after reading "Can you say 'I love you'?), and I stumble on this. No, no, no, that is so far from cliche. I wish I could write poetry half as compelling as this. I really do. Poor Chiriko...glad he inspired this poem, though. I like the very end. . He's happy now, right? Right? And why are you saying that this is bad poetry? It's a style not often used (in my experience), but it suits the ancient setting of Fushigi Yuugi very well. .

Cool no da! (

hmmm... it's... okay. do not like it so much. chiriko is not a favorite of mine. yup your poetry is bad, but the essence of the poem is nice. try writing something better. just write a story, not a poem. you could do better, i kno... i think.

Great job, Kyra-chan! I'm still a little miffed you now know more about Fushigi Yuugi than I, but...still a good poem. Ah well, at least since you wrote a fic I have time to read I could get ahold of you! I thought I was busy...it's amazing you have time to write!

Aww... My poor Chiriko-chan! A little too graphic there...

Honest. I love honest writing. I'm not usually into poems, but I guess it was the fact that it was based around Chiriko instead of anyone else that caught my eye. *-* Kawai.

Awww! *sniff* This was really sweet, and I liked the way it was written. You're really good! . Keep writin!