Hm, interesting. I somewhat agree with Slade, which makes me wonder if something's wrong with me. Away, liked the story. Very well written.

Hmm, i liked it. it was pretty cool. i love the way you portrayed Slade. you really chaptured him well.

I could hear Slade speaking as I read this - you did a great job finding his voice!

Hum, that was interesting. Slade is just the type to talk to himself...

Anyways, good spelling and grammar. I didn't quite catch what the "what I do have is so much more" line... what's he talking about?

Nonetheless, I like your ending line, but I don't quite see the train of thought as to how he got there.