no.

I like your story so far, and I think to myself why must every Artemis Fowl leave me at a cliff hanger and not update for a month or forever, why? Any ways I hope you update one of your two stories.

OMG this is creepy!
??write more?

Oh, this story is so good! It was excellently and heartrendingly written all through out but this last chapter was particularly well-written. That is exactly how I imagine Artemis: selfish and avarious perhaps, but there's a heart in there yet. All he really wants is to be remembered. Just like almost everyone.
I wish you hadn't stopped writing this story because I really want to know what happens next. Come on, why not just post the Holly/Artemis confrontation if it's already written? I'm sure it's amazing and I'd just love to read it.

Lily

Ah! AH! He remembers! I must know his reaction! I must, I must!! I feel like slamming my face on my desk out of fustration, knowing that I probably won't ever find out... Until, of course, you update... whenever that is. Dx

Curiousity killed the cat and it could kill your readers to. Please, don't let that happen and update this fic. It is really good and it would be really disappointing were it to be dropped at this point in the story.

UPDATE!

Good, but you ran words tocether, likethis, three times. Try to work on that.

I do wonder if you are going to continue this fic.

I really want to hear artimis' response and why Argon "took" him.

Curiosity.

this was really good ^^ I hope you do more udates soon =D I'll be puting it on alert

I know this is quite a while but *puppy dogs eyes* can you please update I know you probably forgot the plot by now but I need some closure in how this end...please...=( I mean it has been a year!

I love the plot and everything and I hope Artemis would not ever scarafice Holly for me *pouts*

UPDATE!

/:/Brizo/:/formerly 1st female LEPrecon

Ooh, interesting. Me likey. You're better at the psychological aspect of things than I am.

I like how you explained Artemis' 'cold fury', but I wouldn't mind an extension. Even with the death of everyone he holds dear, I'd think he'd have a few rational thoughts in his head and he'd try and contact Holly... I suppose him revealing the existence of the fairies could be read as: it would stop the assassination attempts and thus preserve his own life; but it bugs me a bit. Maybe I'm just idealizing him.

There's a few funny phrasings in this chapter, but they're not major. My major complaint is the short chappies - why, O why the short chappies? I will be Sad when I reach the end and there are no more chappies, for they are So Short...

I shall read this slowly, for then I can Enjoy it. *feels proud of self* That way, it'll last longer.

Good work!

Good! My only complaint is that there seems to be typos... I like the idea. I thought Holly was characterised well, though I wouldn't be complaining if you expanded more on her thoughts.

Next chapter...

Hey! Your fic wuz really good! Just so ya know, I'm generally very critical of all the fanfictions on the internet, and yours was one of the few that I felt was not overly cheesey or corny!! Great job...& post the next chapter already, the suspense is killing me!! lol

Hi...I havent the slightest clue why, but I was really bored and I decided to read your fic. Turns out, its not half bad. Really good actually.

I guess I was a bit harsh when I shouted at you for insulting my fics. Its just, you're my first flamer, and it was sort of new to me. But now I've had a while to cool down, I accept your opinion as contructive critisisim (I cant spell) and would be honored if you give me more advise on my fics.

Yours Truly,
J. Love