 Gracie Jane 2005-07-22 . chapter 1Wow, what a one-shot! Poor Caden. I don't know how she even managed to finish their phone conversation. I'd be bawling hysterically and would probably have hung up immediately after his answer.
I think what I like most about this story is that, even though it's so sad and there's emotional upheaval, there's a kind of stillness to it, like the peaceful sounds of that song. Good job!
Rock on and write on,
~ ~ ~ Gracie Jane |
 suprise2432 2005-07-21 . chapter 1*sniff* quite sad. damn, i think you could have asked don for help!! lol because thats quite close to what i told him (Before we dated of course). hah and I helped with the speech..
anyway, quite good. Sad and cute... Sute! Cad! hah.
Jack- (with a scowl) BUT WHY DID HE SAY NO! (punches blink) Bastahd!
Everyone else- (rolls eyes)
--Red
PS- in your summary, it should be 'bear' not 'bare'. Just so people don't flame you or put you up on sites and mock it. you know? hahah. |