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Gracie Jane
2005-07-22 . chapter 1
Wow, what a one-shot! Poor Caden. I don't know how she even managed to finish their phone conversation. I'd be bawling hysterically and would probably have hung up immediately after his answer.

I think what I like most about this story is that, even though it's so sad and there's emotional upheaval, there's a kind of stillness to it, like the peaceful sounds of that song. Good job!

Rock on and write on,
~ ~ ~ Gracie Jane
madmbutterfly713
2005-07-22 . chapter 1
I liked this one too! Why do all the Blink Week fics turn out so good? I really love it! Good job!
Terzaphine
2005-07-21 . chapter 1
aw! *sniffs* WHY'd you have to go make it all SAD?!?!?

lol it was good readin! made me crave the 'ot choc'late. but my own, not the overpriced overrated starbucks kind.

lol loves!

Love Jo.
suprise2432
2005-07-21 . chapter 1
*sniff* quite sad. damn, i think you could have asked don for help!! lol because thats quite close to what i told him (Before we dated of course). hah and I helped with the speech..

anyway, quite good. Sad and cute... Sute! Cad! hah.

Jack- (with a scowl) BUT WHY DID HE SAY NO! (punches blink) Bastahd!
Everyone else- (rolls eyes)

--Red

PS- in your summary, it should be 'bear' not 'bare'. Just so people don't flame you or put you up on sites and mock it. you know? hahah.
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