I liked it alout, update soon! You actually put Jack in character, unlike some people.

Perfect. The best story explaining the birth of Kyra and the death of Jack, that I have read. I'm adding this to my favorites list.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

AWSOME!

I like it. Never seen the movies, but your story is good. I always like your female leads.

this story is awsome cant wait till the next chapter is out

Amazing fic - I love your style! Can't wait to read more of your work!