Aww... that's sad... how could Tsuzuki fall for Muraki, when Muraki did all those horrible things to him? I feel bad for Hisoka. In any case, I thought that, although it was a bit confusing, this story was awesome!

wow. that was weird.. ^_^ but interesting. good job. now im no longer bored..

Hmm interesting. I especially liked the ending. ^^ I hope I hear more from you! :D

Lovely... It has a lot of potential as a prologue of a bigger plot... Loved it!