You made Kirby sad! >( *squish* Ha! You've been stabbed in the eye with my flute!

Okay, I love the story, but you don't kill Tiff! I'm sorry, but that's crossing the line! J/k, it's really sad but it's a good read as well. I can actually imagine the story in my mind-that might be because I'm listening to Kirby Super Star music as well. Keep writing and God bless!

YOU... MURDERER! So sad... T_T Good fic.

That wasn't too bad, mur. Well written, IMO... though I think I caught an error or two, it seemed gramatically correct as well.

I always imanged Fumu's race to live a bit longer thana human, but I'm not sure. *shrug* Eh well. They still probably wouldn't outlive Kirby's race. XD

Anyway, nice job. Maybe try writin' some other fics? :O

... oh... my... Polokus...

Beyond... excellent... I actually cried when I read this, I can see it all happening... you deserve an award or something for writing this. The emotion and sadness is at it's highest, and you DEFINITELY deserve respect for writing this.

Story idea seems awfully familiar.

(I'm the first reveiwer, w00t!)

Ah, don't worry about it; I killed her too in my fic "Tears In Heaven", so don't feel bad! This was a beautiful story and I wish more people wrote sad stories based on the anime. This going in the favs for me!