awesome story!

Very intersting build up so far, really looking forward to see where this fic is going. I was glad while you made Akane cheat on Ranma, an all to common thing in fics, at least you did not make her cheat with the usual Ryoga or Kuno. I am a little concerned with the planned pairing of Ranma/Nabiki. I don't mind her to much, and I love some other fics where they get together. But so far she hasn't really done much to be deserving of him and I just hope you do something slowly to change that. I personaly hope for a multipairing, in the very least Skuld and Ranko seem way closer to Ranma then Nabiki is. Skuld is sort of a tomboy like what Ranma loved in Akane but slightly nicer and less likely to mallet him. And ranko is well part of his soul.. if she does get split she will be closest thing to a soul mate one could ever have. IN the end I hope this turns to at least Ranma/Nabiki/Skuld/Ranko and since you crossed over with Sm.. any of the scouts are always a plus! hehe

A nice section here, looks like Akane's mind has definitely checked out its common sense for now, and that Nabiki is in a hard position, as Ranma's new helper. Alos liked the cameo characters, hope that Vespa holds up for a while yet, and wondering what's going to happen between Ranma, Ranko, and the other being.

good+

First I would like to say that this a good origonal story that has the potential of going far...

But a few of my concerns:

1) Please don't make Ranko evil and please do not split Ranko from Ranma. I think having them together is the right thing to do though you can give Ranko more story time.

2) I have noticed your grammar and spelling getting better as the story progress. Good Job.

3) Why is Ranma getting punished by a demon anyway, hasn't his life been enough of a living hell?

4) I hope that Ranma gets along with the inner senchi and outer senchi and I hope that Ranma dosn't fight against them.

5) I would also put alot of effort into the conversation that Ranma is definatley going to have with Nabiki. It seems that there is alot of unresolved issues that need worked out and hopefully in the end Ranma can forgive Nabiki..

Well these are just the thoughts of a humble reviewer use them as you like. I love your story and hope to see more of it :-)

Ah, after reading this all over again, I have noticed that the story seems have have problems balancing the four series you have merged. Sailor Moon, most clearly, feels to be a poor sub-plot that can literally be ignored. Every major scene with Ranma has nothing to do with Sailor Moon. I feel it needs to be tied in better.

Secondly, the rest of the Ranma cast seems to have been left to rot, only watered as necessary. If anything, it is a feeling that your writing radiates. ALso, Ranma is presented a bit over the top. Though he still practices and is in amazing physical shape, he shuts himself off and does not eat? The darkness he feels just seems to be exaggerated or not explained well enough.

Thirdly, is the point of the inclusion of Sakuraba only to be Nodoka's orginal family, provide wealth, and be the setting? Because it sure feels that way.

Fourth, as I am sure you know, the spelling, and a bit of grammar, could use some work.

Lastly, the way Ah! My Goddess is progressing is quite nice. It is interesting and feelings well-executed, though, sometimes, I wish more insight to the character's thoughts and actions could be provided.

Sorry if this is all on the more negative side, and perhaps a bit presumptuous, but that is about all I know how to comment on (worthless English classes...) Be assured, I really like your story.

My last comment is - Skuld is AWESOME and I hope your plot will support that. I do hope you are able to update soon!

Nice job. Keep up the good work.

Best,
~JohnnyG

great chapter

even better now

one thing, i am very dubious that australia would give akane back to japan. especially since its a murder rap

the best she could hope for is full lockdown in a psych ward

ah... thank you for getting rid of the abusive tomboy. however the rest of your story goes(and rest assured, i will read it) i'm very glad for that part.

The plot thickens and is getting more and more interesting!!

^_^I like it.

very nice, i had to reread the story and i am glad i did, i discovered so much more to it this time around, such a good read

"But I hope this at least makes the folks who have been emailing me happy that I am again picking the story up."

yup, real happy

Hello.

I just started reading this, and I like it! It's got all right grammer, so ur proof reader's doin a good job! It's story is... actally rather original so far... but I think summoning an A class demon to make Ranma's life hel is a BIT too much. Maybe u could make him comedic releafe? The big, bad uberdemon of the starting of hell is caught off guard by the Chaos that surrounds Ranma...

Oh. I'd like to cat my vote for NOT breaking Ranma into wo parts. It would almost surely mean curing the curse, and I don't like thatfor various reasons... plus, Ranma Ranko pairings hae just seemed so *RONG* to me... *shiver*

Anywho, Keep up the good work!

Notes/Comments: GOOD STORY IMHO, That said...
Things I would like to see happen or simply suggested ideas from this meager reviewer.
Continued updates about what is going on with the Tendo’s (Kasumi/Akane/Soun, & The Baka Panda)
How will the others react to find out that Ranma & Akane are still alive…
How will the Senshi deal with Ranma & Co.
Will Ranko be a force for good or evil?

I look forward to reading more.