hi sweety..

i just read you charlie fanfic... and i loved... :D you really did a good job with it.

Nice story, I enjoyed it.

You do have a few typos, spelling errors- that sort of thing. but, nothing that can't be solved by another read through or a beta.

Good, solid premise and descriptive writing.

:o OMG dude you're so awesome playing a junkie. LOL ok, no not a personal attack here, just referring to another character of yours with problems (a)

Anyway I can't believe how long this was! Gotta be the most massive RPG update ever! (*thinks* Although if I strung a few of mine together too I might get something longish *snigger*).

It was a totally engrossing story. You're fabulous writing Charlie. I know I told you that with your songfic but, dude, I can't believe how everytime I read something you write with him I can hear him saying it all in my head. It's fantastic! :D I get so deluded as to whether it's from the show... admit it, that's your secret job, you write for LOST. Why didn't you tell us? :P

Great story Zarina! You write Charlie very well, I can see him acting that way and feeling frantic because he couldn't find the drugs. Poor guy!