Nice poem. I liked the ending lines.

Heh, heh, I'm a different Ragnarok. Your story's good but I don't think that's what he was thinking. Maybe you should've put in something about Seifer? I think that'd make it better. Great job though!

;-; *sniff*

I'm not a good critic of poetry because I don't read it often, but "Isolation" is

Deep...never played the game that far. I never got past DISC 1 ! You ruined the ending for me :[ GOT FARKLE?

! Goooood Poema !

This poem is coo' but it doesnt really convince me that this was what he was thinking during that time. Since like the relationship didnt really develop until a lil bit befo' theyre adventure in space? the lastsentence at the end gives it a nice touch, but the laststanza also makes him seem i'unno wimpy..still god tho'

Pretty good. I could see Squall thinking that. My only advice really is to try NOT to insult the game you are writing for in the summary. O_o

Actually, I do agree with you that it does sound like a poem in away. I'm not that big of a fan of FF8 so I really couldn't get into Squall's character. It was NOT ment to be a prayer though, which means I needa work harder.

I'm sorry, in advance, poems aren't something I understand, but this poem sounds more like a prayer.