wow that awesome go rae lol

i need to know what happenss!l0ol

*Looks at you with big puppy eyes full of tears* I love this fanfic so much. Please update... you're gonna disappoint a lot of people, me too.

Will you ever update this? *sigh* Loved, just loved, that she bit Cadmus's tongue half off (and that Slade thought it was funny) when will he freaking save her? Update puh-leeze!

Interesting. Wow, lots of mages in there, huh? I feel so sorry for Rae right now.

Oo, quite wonderful! Slade is soo evil, I love it! Can't believe that Rae is too, though.

Ahaha...that was funny, and you have to admit the guy deserved it. Any way, make sure to update this, or I shall... shall...um... ah, heck, why bother. I'm no threat. But please update? *makes puppy-dog face*

Well, it's been 6 months now, and you haven't updated. I know what you must be thinking: "What right do you have reprimanding me? It's been 6 months and you just now reviewed!" I stumbled onto your fic just today, and was ecstatic to find a well-written Slade/Raven pairing.

Yes, you heard me right. I LOVE Slade and Raven as a couple. Do you realize how HARD it is to find a decently written fiction about those two? Near to impossible! And then here your story comes along; beautifully written, realistically paced. The plot is forming, the emotion is growing. You've only gotten 3 chapters, and I'm already falling in love!

I'm behind you all the way on this fic. It's an incredible read so far. Your writing style is to my taste; with deep, insightful thoughts and realistic dialouge. Slade is in character, Raven is in character, and they both have just the right amount of push to make this a wonderful pairing. When I saw that scene on the rooftop, the one from "Birthright" I think it was called, I had the EXACT idea as you! I mean, come on! They just looked TOO good together to NOT be a couple. How...erotic. ;) Anyways...I love your story! Try to update soon. It's a jump for me to get attatched to a fic that might not keep going.
~Kodu

i hope you update soon. the story is very interesting

There are no words that can explain how AMAZING this was. This is a definite on my list of favorites.

i love your story so far so don't stop or i'll be pretty upset.

Whee! You updated! Great chapter! Can't wait for another.

Heh, sorry the review is so late, hun. I thought I already reviewed this chapter..

Anyway, I likes it. I winced and looked away when she bit off his tongue though. *shudder* XD It was written extremely well though; very descriptive. Kudos, man!
-Kat-

Okay, so, I was bored one day, and was like "Hmm, let's go read something on and that's exactly what I did. Guess what story I stumbled on? This one! Yours! This beautiful story of yours! I was like "Awesome! New story" So of course I saved the link to your story... And then nothing. I waited for months (month? I'm not sure exactly how long, but it seemed like awhile, ecspecially when there were only two chapter for me to re-read) for an update! Then, one night "Hmm, I'm bored, let's see if any of these old stories have updated" and TA-DA, you had!
I must say, I am VERY glad you finally updated, it feels like I've been wating forever. Personally, unless the story is written exceptionally well, I can't stand most Raven-whoever pairings. RavenSlade (Or "Slaven" as I love to call it) is my favorite Raven pariing, and your story is written just beautifully.
So, if you can't guess from all that: I LOVE YOUR STORY! Please update soon, and don't make me wait forever again.
The only one problem I see with your story is that the other Titans aren't really included. I mean, sure they don't need to be INCLUDED, but in your story it's like they dropped off the face of teh earth.
Oh well, It's stil and awesome story. Sorry for the long and rambling review, but it's late, and I'm tired, and I've been re-reading your story for the past hour, so my mind is slighty... off.
Yes! I love you're story! Please update soon soon soon!
Never stop writing, you're awesome at it

Miles 'o' smiles
-Lai-Ku ^_^

P.S. I love "Monty Python and the Holy Grain" also!
P.P.S. Yar, I also want to be a pirate matey...

I really like the whole "plot development" idea! ;-) Anyway, your story is great, but I have a few questions. Who is Cadmus? Is he an OC, or did I just not watch every Teen Titans episode? The details you go into add a lot to the stories overall appeal. Also, when some people write Slade/Raven stories, Slade develops into a B.B/Robin pushover. Its refreshing to see an author who sticks to the characters behaviors/attitudes.

I loved it! I certainly do hope you continue this story. I also hope you don't take as long as you did the last time to update. Keep up the good work.

gracefulraven,

out!