This story is so awsome!

This is pretty interesting. As for a character,

Name: Starshine.

Species: Star Spirit (kid)

Hobbies: Floating around, training, playing games, and fighting bad guys.

Weapon: None.

Over world ability: Hover Board. Mario and the party can ride him as a Hover Board. While doing this, they can move over water and move twice as fast, but can't interact with people or the environment.

First Move: Tackle.

Support Move: What is a support move? If you tell me, then I'll give this to you.

Third Move: Spin Blade. Starshine spins quickly and does damage to all enemies, and of course, with the action command, it does even more damage. It is not weakened by defense.

Support Move: Why do you have this written down twice?

Other: A Star Kid who has only been in Star Haven since a few days before Bowser attacked. Very smart.

Likes: Any person on the side of good.

Hates: Villains and Bullies.

Gender: Male.

Good story! Its in my faves list!

Yay! At last you finally updated! :) Lol, I liked the part where Jr. Troopa jumped from the top of the gate and landed on his head. XD I could imagine that happening! I'm glad that the flame saved Mario from getting hurt but I'm dissapointed that Tsunami doesn't want to join Mario and the team. :( Hey! How can Mario go home when his house is at Toad Town? By the way, what the attack, Arson Goddess looks like? You haven't even explained what it is! I think Goombario has to mind his language but good thing this is rated T. If it wasn't, I wonder what the reviewers will say? You know, you missed the part where Eldstar and the other Star Spirits were telling Mario what was happening. How come you didn't put that part in this chappie? Lol, Teenage Mutant Ninja Koopas, da-da-da-da-da-da! *humming the TMNT theme song* I would love to see them on a tv show! XD *giggles* Anyhoo, hope you update soon and please continue! ;)

Hi. I liked this chapter a lot. Update as soon as possible!

Wowsers! You actually UPDATED! Horray!

Well, I sort of drifted away for a 3 month haitus in Fiery Sapphire, and then I snapped right back into it and got to writing. Sorry if I decided to waver in and out of reality... *creepy music* Hahaha! I promise it won't happen again!

Anyway, I'm glad we're getting along in the story line. Whoohoo, onto the Koopa Bros.'s fortress! We'll pwn some Koopa butt! Who knows what'll happen in the future. So many chapters, so many turns of events! Horray for fanfictions!

Wow, your description has gotten a lot better, and the dialouge is very cool. Hehe... 'oh crap.' Teenage Mutant Ninja Koopas. Can't wait for the fortress part, and you BETTER update soon, or else...something bad'll happen. Very bad.

Just kidding. Clario needs to live/not be in a vegatative state. Well, great chapter, and thanks for keeping me in it!!

-Flameboo

Boy, do I have a list of OC allies for you!

1. Name: Magma

Hobbies: Eats fiery enemies like they were Sloppy Joes (Burgers), kicking butt, being a hero

Weapon: None

Overworld ability: Swims on lava, and Mario rides on top of him (MUST WEAR SPIKE TOP BADGE)

The moves are the same as the Lava Pirahna's.

Other: Is a red Iron Cleft with red shoes.

Likes: Lava, volcano, friends, Peach

Hates: Bowser, annoying enemies, getting dizzy (which is why Magma is immune to dizziness), cowards, enemies always getting the upper hand

Gender: Male

2. Name: Pine

Hobbies: Stealing energies from enemies, camouflaging himself in forest, being a hero

Weapon: None

Overworld ability: Attacks an enemy and steals HP and FP, then gives the stolen points to Mario

First three moves are same as any Fuzzy's attacks.

Support Move: Fuzzy Frenzy! - Calls an army of Fuzzies to attack an enemy and absorb his HP and/or FP.

Other: Is a Forest Fuzzy.

Likes: Lava, volcano, friends, Peach

Hates: Bowser, stealing from innocent people, getting poisoned(which is why Pine immune to poison), enemies always getting the upper hand

Gender: Male

3. Name: Spookster

Hobbies: Stealing stuff from enemies, scaring people, protecting Bow from being harmed, being a hero

Weapon: Two swords at once

Overworld ability: Slices any enemy in range near Mario

Moves same as Bow's except that the Fan Smack is replaced with Sword Slash

Support Move: Double Slash - Spins around while swords pointed in seperate directions, making Spookster look like a sword-slicing tornado while slicing an enemy.

Other: Is a Boo from Gusty Gulch that has a crush on Bow.

Likes: Halloween, haunted houses, friends, Bow (he's her boyfriend), Peach

Hates: Bowser, scaring people that are easily scared to death, Bow being told what to do, enemies always getting the upper hand

Gender: Male

4. Name: Pink

Hobbies: Swimming, underwater treasure hunting, being a hero

Weapon: Stealth in water

Overworld ability: Squirts ink at enemy that approaches, making Mario able to pass the enemy easily.

Moves are the same as all Bloopers' moves.

Other: Is a pink Blooper.

Likes: The ocean, islands, friends, Peach (like Peach were an idol to Pink), being immune to poison and dizziness

Hates: Bowser, Bloopers that ambush Mario and gang, suspicious beings, enemies always getting the upper hand

Gender: Female

5. Name: Powerbite

Hobbies: Being stealthy, eating Fuzzies (minus Pine) bug-like enemies like a venus flytrap, drinking water for rejuvanating energy (And that includes drinking ocean water), being a hero

Weapon: Electricity

Overworld ability: Pops up at enemy in range and chomps it down

First move: Chomp - Same as any other Pirahna's chomp attack. (May poison enemy)

Other: Is a yellow Pirahna Plant.

Likes: The ocean, islands, friends, Peach, being immune to poison and dizziness

Hates: Bowser, being ambushed by Jr. Troopa, fire, lava, suspicious beings, enemies always getting the upper hand

Gender: Male

6. Name: Rocky & Mugsy

Hobbies: Stealing from other enemies, being heroes

Weapon: A handgun (for Rocky) and a rocket launcher (for Mugsy)

Overworld ability: Rocky gets on Mugsy's head, Mugsy jumps in the air and stomps any enemy flat.

Rocky's moves: Based on any super spy's moves.

Mugsy's moves: Based on Tubba Blubba's Heart's attacks.

Other: Is a pink Blooper.

Likes: They both like money (They're NOT evil robbers), friends, Peach (like Peach were a queen to them)

Hates: Bowser, Bandits stealing coins from group and getting away, suspicious beings, enemies always getting the upper hand

Gender: Both are male.

7. Name: Ayden

Hobbies: Performing acrobatic moves, being a hero

Weapon: Slingshot

Overworld ability: Always alerts Mario for whenever danger's about to strike.

Moves are the same as all Shy Guys' moves.

Other: Is a white Shy Guy.

Likes: Toys, friends, Peach (like Peach were an idol to him), being immune to dizziness

Hates: Bowser, General Shy Guy, stealing from innocent people, suspicious beings, enemies always getting the upper hand

Gender: Male

8. Name: Shogun

Hobbies: Flying, magic, predicting good things in the future

Weapon: Stealth in water

Overworld ability: Rides on broom with Mario, flying over dangerous things (like lava, which makes him highly useful for escaping a volcano).

Moves are the same as all Magikoopas' moves.

Other: Is a gold Magikoopa.

Likes: Magic, friends, Peach (like Peach were a queen to him), being immune to poison and dizziness

Hates: Bowser, anyone who works for Bowser, suspicious beings, enemies always getting the upper hand

Gender: Male

9. Name: Vega

Hobbies: Blowing bad things up, flying, always getting automatically revived whenever he blows up

Weapon: Himself

Overworld ability: Blows up any victim in sight.

Moves are the same as all Bullet Bill's moves.

Other: Is a Bullet Bill.

Likes: Castles, danger, friends, Peach, being immune to poison and dizziness (since he's all made of steel)

Hates: Bowser, abushes, hard-to-pass obstacles, enemies always getting the upper hand

Gender: Male

10. Name: Snowflake

Hobbies: Flying, making wishes

Weapon: None

Overworld ability: Freezes enemy to an ice cube.

Moves are the same as the Crystal King's and Huff n' Puff's moves, except for making extra enemies.

Support move: Recharge! - Refills FP to full after hugging Mario.

Other: Is an Ice Puff.

Likes: The sky, snow, ice, stars (like her best playmate, Twink and her hero, Muskular), Twink, friends, Peach (like Peach were an idol to Snowflake), being immune to poison

Hates: Bowser, Huff n' Puff, Jr. Troopa, enemies always getting the upper hand

Gender: Female

Please continue!

Wow, this is so funny! Keep updateing, dude! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Name: Spark.

Race: Whatever Watt is.

Hobbies: Gaming, Sleeping, Thinking, Collecting shinys (Badges and Starpeices.)

Weapon: Electricity.

Over world ability: He starts jumping, He jumps higher the closer you are to badges or Starpeices.

First Move: Spark, Does 1 Piercing damage to one foe.

Second Move: Flash, Does 1 Piercing damage to all foes and it has a chance to stun them for 2 turns.

Third Move: Zap, Does 4 Piercing damage to one foe and can stun him for 1 turn.

Forth Move: Zap Storm, Does Zap to all foes.

Other: Is one of Watts Friends.

Good or Evil: Good.

Likes: Watt, How funny Jr. Troopa is, Shinys.

Hates: His Parents, Abuse, Bowser.

Gender: Gale.

Good story! Here is my character:

Name: Teo T.

Hobbies: Reading, Training in the Fighting Club

Weapon: Mushroom Hammer

Over world ability: Barrier, Teo uses his mushroom hammer (which is magic) to create a barrier. He can protect Mario from enemies (the enemies can't go through the barrier). With the barrier, Mario can walk in areas with sandstorms (Dry Dry Desert), Poisoned Air and Underwater (for a limited time). So Teo is really useful.

First Move: Mushroom Strike - Teo uses his hammer to attack.

Support Move: Healing Mushroom (1 Fp) - Teo uses a Mushroom to heal 5 Hp to Mario or himself.

Third Move: Rock Shroom Rain (4 Fp) - Teo calls rock mushrooms to fall on all enemies.

Support Move: Secret Power (5 Fp) - Teo uses a card. There are 4 different events that can happen: 1 - Healing Card (restores 3 Hp to Teo and Mario), 2 - Power Card (Rises his or Mario's power by 2 points), 3 - Attack Card (Teo attacks all enemies with his hammer), 4 - Explosive Card (An explosion damages both allies and enemies)

Other: Teo T. is a Toad with blue spots. He is always happy and determinated.

Likes: He really likes to read but he also likes fights so he joined the Fighting Club. Princess Peach, his a big fan of her.

Hates: Fights among friends, Piranha Plants, Spiders, Bowser, because he is always kidnaping the princess.

Gender: Male

And suddenly, Flameboo arose from the ashes of a two week vacation! Ha! This...is...so...cool! This is a thank you, comeing form a FEMALE. Anyways, keep it up, yo! (Pwnage by cookies!) Bye.

Cool! :) Another author who is dedicating a chapter to me! ^_^ First, Darth Ben Vader dedicates a Powerpuff Girls chapter to me, now you dedicate this chapter to me! :D Gee, this must be the longest chapter you've ever done! Anyway, keep it up! :)

This is actually pretty interesting, since it mixes in original characters without destroying the plotline too much. Here's a character that I'd prefer to be a kind of rival that appears to fight. If you must make her an ally, though, go ahead.

Name: Tsunami

Hobbies: Flying, kicking butt, burning stuff

Weapon: A whip she calls Justice Rising

Overworld ability: As I've said before, I don't really want her in the main party. If she HAS to be, then her ability if lifting Mario upwards. The catch is that she can only go upwards and not move left or right.

First Move: Justice- Tsunami attacks one enemy with Justice Rising.

Second Move: Arson Goddess- (Costs FP) Tsunami basically sets fire to the enemy.

Upgrade, Rank 1 Move: Cheer- (Costs more FP) One person gets an attack boost.

Upgrade, Rank 2 Move: Liberation- (Costs a truckload of FP) Quite a bit of damage to all enemies. Which is why the cost needs to be steep.

Other: Is a human/Paragoomba hybrid. This is why she has wings. Wants to prove she doesn't rely on her friends, and wants to either save Peach and everyone else who's captured herself (if she's a rival) or go with a completely new group (if she's an ally). Nickname is Tsu'.

Likes: The color blue, tamagotchis, DDR, friends

Hates: Her family (WHOAMG ANGST WHINE BITCH), people who underestimate and/or ridicule her, parasites (long story), losing/fighting with friends

Gender: Gee, I think I refered to a male as a she throughout this entire form...Of COURSE it's a girl!

Thank you!

nice story! i would like this charcter in the story-
name: Posie
race: Amazee Dayzee
hobbies: sleeping, playing in the fields
weapons: flower blades
over world ability: Flower wind (same as Flurrie's ability, except that Posie blows winds from her mouth when Mario squeezes her stomach and the winds are pink and flowers come out as well, and the winds smell sweet)
first move: Flower Blades
support move: Sing
second move: Flower bounce
support move: Poson Wave
third move: Petal Blast
support move: Flower upgrade (can upgrade either Mario or herself)
other: has two older brothers, Root & Leaf.
likes: Sunshine, flowers, Mario, napping, her brothers, & Bub- Ulbs
hates: clouds, thorns, Shiver City, Crazee Dayzees (thinks they're conseited), & Lakitus
gender: female
Well, that's about it. Can you include this character? Can't wait for the next update!

Yeah! The story I am in! I feel bad for Twink, I always liked the little guy. I'm looking forward to the next chapters!