I think that you wrote a very good Avatar Story. I wonder though what Admiral Zhao was doing in the story because he was supposed to have died in the Siege of the North Epsiode when Aang and the Ocean Spirit dragged him into the sea. Any way it was good and I also like the fact that there were few spelling errors as is the case in most writings on the internet

great

Yay! Awesome! Incredible! That chapter had everything! Thrilling action! Chaste, romantic fluff! Drama! Adventure!

lalalala this story is good,.

Ah, you had me confused there for a minute. I thought it strange they could fool Zhao without having to shave Katara's head, but then when Katara saw that her hair was gone I thought "OH ok." But the poor thing. She had to have been growing her hair her entire life.

Man, that was a long chapter. I don't think all of that could fit in a thirty minute show. I think it'd have to be a two-part.

Whoa...what an expansive and detailed chapter. It's hard to write BIG battle scenes, but you pulled it off quite nicely.

Sokka rocked out loud this chapter. That made me happy.

Zhao DIED? (cries) No!

(sniffle)...Well, the Zutara at the end made me feel better. Good chapter. Can't wait for Book Earth!

Wow, what a great chapter! And I'm glad to see you do your research :-) Good job with this!

I thought that sounded familiar! ANd where's this four antions website. It sounds interesting.

nice new episode...are you gonna end it at one point? wasnt so much love scene as touchy-stuff, it was good though...new eposide soon

This chapter thing is a great idea. I can't wait for new episodes. Yours are great however, and the Zutara romance is going at a nice pace. I like the bickering thing there at the end.
It's great, update soon!
Luci

^_^ Yay! I love your writing! Please hurry and continue the story! ~Luna

Awesome! Great! Fantastico! I can't rememeber how to say it in German, but awesome! You really need to apply for a job at Nickelodian! One note, you said the name Kai comes from Japanese, it also comes from Hawaiian, it means ocean. (Trust me, I've been there) Still, awesome! Bring Haru back in the Earth book!

Nice job! Also, I'd like to point out that "eyebrow" doesn't necessarily have to symbolize a hairy place above the eye. A brow is basically a forehead, so the "brow" of the eye would just be above it. An eyebrow doesn't need hair to be one...jeez, I sound like a nerd. ;)

I like your work a lot, I just discovered it. I love these 'episodes'

they cut off her hair i love her hair it was so pretty why did you DO THAT HM well whatever update soon i love this chapter