Haha that was great. It actually sounded like a 12 year old kid telling a story.. very nice, very nice.

This was really, very good, it's an interesting idea, having the boys younger and writing in the point of view you did. I enjoyed it, you're very talented.

ZOMG. This is the cutest story that ever existed, ever. How did I not know about this? You = win. Win!

!!

Aww. I wanna puppy now.

They sent him a picture of the dog? That's so evil I love it.

Ahahah. I love the way you began it. Its like.. 'er..how do I phrase this?'

Also..

Where are you?! You're never online.
When I'm on, anyways.
Which, alright, I admit, hasn't been vert often either, but... I've been extremely busy. E X T R E M E L Y.
With spaces :]

Well, just in case I don't catch you online on time, I'm going to Korea for a month on the 28th. So I might not be online as much. >.

Aw, Charlie Bird! I like this a lot. It was cute, 'speshly the narration. It reminded me of The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Nighttime [the narration, not the plot. Altough both do have a little to do with dogs.] Good job, I can't wait for your next one!

Heya!
Cool story idea. I was a little thrown off at first because its written differently than most I've seen but I got the hang of it.
Keep writing! It'd be cool to see how you progress as a writer.
~Friday

hey!! another great fic!! When we talked that one time (was it raining) you convinced me ta review but they shall remain unsigned until I think up a new pen name cuz I’m taking down all of my old crappy fics and putting up the new ones. Anyway, now that i've shared all that unnecessary info I suppose I should actually get to reviewing cuz, ya know, thats generally what people do in a review.
ok, while I do apologize for never reviewing your stuff before now, I do want you ta know that i've read and enjoyed every bit of it and think you're an amazing writer. I really liked this story, the main character seamed so sweet and even though some not so great things were happening around him that forced him to grow up a little it seamed like he was also able to hang onto some of his innocence...but what do i know? maybe im completely off and maybe thats not what you were trying to convey at all. anyway the point is that you did a really great job on this fic (as well as the rest of them... "Abstract concepts"...I absolutly LOVED it!! and "Im Sorry About Your dog" was fantastic!!) anyway, do have a nice day and I look foreword to reading your stuff in teh future.

-Mel

Aw, that was really cute! And well-written; the way you wrote it made it seem like it was coming from a twelve-year-old, rather than an eloquent fifteen-year-old. Bravo, Sammy, bravo.

Aww. Very cute. I love your writing so much. It simply amazes me that you can make your writing so versetile, and make the narrator really believable as a twelve year old boy. Really really. So yes, wonderful story.