hi amy!
I'm in SDD right now.
i think the teacher will get mad if I type any more, so I'll review later...it looks like an interesting story!
~Rajita~

You know, I can tell you have great ideas, and are a very imaginative, creative person, but I think you need to put more description into your stories instead of just filling it with people speaking. You need to set more of a background. Describe the way Ketre's hair moves around when he attacks the monsters, his beating heart etc. You get the drift. It will draw the reader into the story more. I mean, not that my stories are not welcoming of criticism or something! Otherwise, good work- keep it up!

Get onto the other part and quick. ok.

Oooo...this is getting interesting! I can't wait to see more!

kewl! please write more! i like where this story is heading!

wow, that was really good! I can't wait to find out what happens with all of them!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more!!! ^_~

Describing anime characters really doesn't work all that well does it? I think this is a very good story Amy. Not that I understand who all these people you are talking about are, Cloud and Vincent and that. I doubt I'll be able to understand many of the references to the game but it seems an interesting plot so far. I hope it won't be too long though, reading off the computer gives me a headache.