 Crow that learned to fly 2009-06-29 . chapter 1Great story. Very cute and Chouji is an amazing teddy bear. |
 _redux 2009-05-01 . chapter 1 Now, this was beautiful! Believable characters, and it felt completely natural - I could definitely see this. You have a wonderful way with words too. Good job. |
 FireWingRhapsody 2009-02-03 . chapter 1Oh this story is so cute and amazing. I can't remember the last time I blushed because of how cute it was. You have a really good way with words and I think that, if it came down to it, these three would totally end up like this =33 |
 Blue Jay 21 2008-12-07 . chapter 1I loved it! I love what you did for Choji, for he is a misunderstood charactor. It was really good. |
 crimsonstain 2008-10-16 . chapter 1It's just so sweet! Just like Chouji, I guess...lol! |
 Tina/Ino 2008-07-12 . chapter 1 KYA! *superflyingtacklepounce* Oh. my. god.
-insert fangirl scream here-
That is one of the best written fanfics I've read in a year. And it was all cute and fluffy and... *screams again*
I'm an Ino roleplayer, and I have recently accepted the fact that InoChou will happen... Stupid Temari. But this is something I hadn't seen before, and it actually fits well!
I love how you described each of them, and I love the little note at the beginning! (I'm online at 3am regularly-- I understand the questioning-own-sanity thing...) And thank you, THANK YOU for spelling Chouji's name right!!
Congratulations: you just converted Tina to being an InoShikaChou fan! =) Teehee! *wanders off to find the sequel* |
 dr. sluice 2008-05-31 . chapter 1This always has been one of my favorites. |
 Temari778 2008-04-27 . chapter 1This was so incredibly cute! :D I love this threesome. |
 MissBMarie 2008-01-30 . chapter 1Your writing style is beautiful my dear! Such a fabulous and well imagined story! The feeling put into your words is heavenly. Best InoShikaChou I've read in a very long time! |
 Pookster 2007-08-21 . chapter 1This is the first thing I've read in over a year that's made me cry. It's so unbelieveably beautiful that I just sat staring at the screen with tears running down my face at the end. Thank you so much for writing something so great, and insightful, and thank you so much to your parents for bringing you into this world to share your wonderful words with everyone who happens across your stories (especially this one). For something written at 1 AM, this was beyond brilliant. |
 B.J. Sanders 2007-08-05 . chapter 1Awe, wouldn't it be good if everyone could have that? See, now you've got me feeling all sentimental and stuff (But that's okay! ^^) Hehe. Beautiful story. Thank you for writing it. (Is it weird that I'm thanking you??) |
 CantarellaKisses 2007-08-04 . chapter 1Sweet, but still with depth and dimensions. Kudos. |
 Jefepato 2007-06-17 . chapter 1It's a shame I don't really enjoy yaoi, because this is some damn fine writing. |
 Goatis 2007-06-07 . chapter 1Well written and thoughtful, very good personality descriptions, and very sweet. |
 slaughtergirl 2007-05-24 . chapter 1OMG OMG OMG that was so frickin adorable and cute and cuddly and gorgeous and so cute...Chouji really is the best isnt he?
YaY for stories like this
^_^ slaughtergirl |