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Reviews for: In This, The Phantom's Opera
Litteratura
2005-11-19 . chapter 1
I saw the link on your DA so I came! I want to read more and I will get to it.. eventually.

I really enjoyed this piece, the imagery really got the point across, very vivid. I just wondered if you gave any though to the order of the lines. Are the progressing in any certain pattern? If so, I missed it. It might be cool to line up the images with the actual story... or group liked images together and break them into stanzas.

Its wonderful! These are just thoughts!
--Litteratura
CrystalFNfire
2005-08-26 . chapter 1
O... scary...*shivers* "Dripping through dark" like that line...

I realized something... you, MaidenHair, Syen, and Pimpernelunderthecelticmoon are all in this together aren't you?! *gives paranoid gasp* I KNEW IT! Your wills are bent to kill me! NO!
Blodeuedd
2005-08-07 . chapter 1
Oh. Perfectly shudderful! Your words are not too flowery and carefully chosen, making for an overall poem that transports us immediately to that location we all know and love...the Paris Opera!
Admirable job. I do like how you write Phanfiction very much. :)
Soprano of the Labyrinth
2005-08-06 . chapter 1
It's really good. The rithon to it is amazing, and so is the way it sujest images.
Maidenhair
2005-07-22 . chapter 1
O! So good! LUV this! Yay! Good thing it was short too, because I have VERY little time for the computer anymore. *sobs violently*. Well, keep writing! Oh, I finished my novel. :) Tally-ho.
~M.
Elven Fish
2005-07-22 . chapter 1
Oo! So creepy and cool sounding! Hurrah for you,Mizamour!
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