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MoshiMoshiQueen
2009-09-05 . chapter 1
Really great work on this. I thought you kept them in character.
El Pii
2009-07-27 . chapter 1
This is very good! and they're both kept in character - one thing that I appreciate most in fics. The stroy's even plausible. Which leads me to mention that just because you're the manager of the best Naruto community in existence (Brothers of the leaf)[you are, aren't you?] doesn't mean you shouldn't put in your OWN stories. Especially if they desrve it. Especially if they're the best.

Good luck with future writing, and I hope you don't stop for too long!
- LP
show.me.the.stars
2009-07-19 . chapter 1
Haha, I'm an absolute sap.

This fic brought tears to my eyes.

I absolutely adore Sasuke and Naruto friendship stories. It's so hard to find really well written ones like this one, ones that can make you laugh at Naruto's antics (haha, I feel exactly the same as he when I have to walk on my tiled floors at the moment--Winter is so chilly!), ones that make you smile when Sasuke involuntarily acts cute while trying to keep a conversation with Naruto flowing, and ones that bring tears to your eyes when the topic of "family" comes up. Stories really that invoke deeper thinking, I REALLY enjoy those. And also stories that keep the two in character! They're really great too.

But yes, this story was amazing, and I enjoyed every word.

Thank you very much for posting this--and I only wish there were more great authors like you out there!

Have a good one!

x.
xxxfallenskyxxx
2009-07-09 . chapter 1
Absolutely. loved. this! I think it really expressed the relationship and their thoughts extremely well. Keep up the amazing work!
Taco Chocobo
2009-04-13 . chapter 1
Very sweet! I loved that only when they decided to go back upstairs that the furnace kicked in.
puregarnet
2009-04-10 . chapter 1
Love it!! More sasuke naruto brother relation stories please...?
False-Image
2008-08-30 . chapter 1
That was incredibly sweet. I really loved it ^_^
:)
2008-07-22 . chapter 1
Hee, very cute~!
Shaitanah
2008-04-27 . chapter 1
Loved this story! It was so bittersweet and very IC.
xxguesswhoxx
2008-03-29 . chapter 1
wow evil furnace lol awesome story ^_^
suuuy
2008-03-20 . chapter 1
"As slowly and quietly as he could, he tiptoed back down the hall and began to edge his way down the stairs, wincing as he reached the bottom and his bare feet made contact with the uncarpeted hardwood floor that was so. Friggin. Cold. Shit, it was cold. Naruto wasn’t sure which he hated more, winter or 3 am. He decided he hated Sasuke the most. Definitely."

^haha.. I have done this way too many times. I love your descriptions of the dead of night.. or should I say morning?

Other than that, this story was really relaxing and laid back... just like that song, unsurprisingly, I suppose. Did you play it (Name" by GooGoo Dolls) the whole time you were writing? I can't imagine working on a story for a whole year... I'd probably abandon it after like 2 months of writer's block. :) Best wishes for your next story(?) ...(oh shit, I just noticed this story is like 3 years old. >. Sorry about the 'bump')!

~s-u-y
xBlackxButterflyx
2008-02-26 . chapter 1
i luved it
charlie and lola
2007-12-29 . chapter 1
Just...perfect. You made me cry again. *glare* XD
Zetnnik
2007-09-09 . chapter 1
Aw... I've just been loving your Naruto/Sasuke friendship fics... Thanks. Good job.
baie-baie
2007-08-24 . chapter 1
A rather fitting conclusion. I'm not a regular reader of anything Sasuke and Naruto, but I thought that this was remarkable well written. Perhaps I will look into other SasuNaru fics.
Keep up the wonderful work.
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