Awesome story, 200 out of 20...id like to see more chapters, this kinda left me in partial suspense.

Wow, I like this story already, especially your OC Nami and how she dealt with Fargo.

Something that slipped my mind in the chap 2 review is. Really interesting plot with Nami. I'd of never thought of that, lol. Anyway, she's a really good character. *bows*

ANNA

I'm sorry you don't get alot of reviews (I know the feeling) lol. But there isn't alot of fans of chrono cross, let alone people who like alot of the side characters. But I think your a brilliant writer personally. Okay I'm rambling here, but I really love Karsh so I know how you feel. His life is so sad. I have this whole Karsh/Riddel idea thats festered in my mind for WAY too long. Maybe you inspired me to get it out. Again you rock. I think you do a really good job of portraying them here.

ANNA

Yea, Nikki is really kind of inspiring to write about when I get to thinking about it. I mean, at first I didn't really pay alot of attention to him, then I realised how hard it would actually be to be him. But my best friend kinda hates him which makes it ** me, lol. ANyway, yea, I'm a rocker so he's cool. Great start, and thanks for all your reviews and fav and alert,lol. You should try writing a Kirge sometimes though. *beams* oh and I'll try to update though I have a hell of a time with that.

ANNA

Wow, this is really awesome. Can't wait for Chapter 3. Great work!

I'm sorry you haven't been reviewed yet! It's an injustice I tell you, but this section is sometimes lacking in that sort of thing.

Anyway, I think I like Nami. She's someone many people can relate to. Innate supremacism? Interesting concept.

And I never did like Fargo. Update soon!