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xlanelane
2008-11-25 . chapter 3
She needs Miroku!
xlanelane
2008-11-25 . chapter 2
Urging to write MiroKoha!
xlanelane
2008-11-25 . chapter 1
They aren't Miroku/Koharu, which I love to death. But since they're Koharu, I love them.
pinay-girl100
2007-08-16 . chapter 6
I like Koharu. Sango, just really gets on my nervous since she can`t understand that Miroku really needs someone to bear him a child or else his goal won`t happen! If she likes him so much, then why won`t she just confess? Isn`t it obvious that Miroku goes crazy over almost every woman? He even spies on her when she`s taking a bath at the hot spring, isn`t that a clue that he likes her? I mean, I know it isn`t easy to confess but still!
Geraldine Hake
2007-02-10 . chapter 6
I wish you would continue these--I'm so enamored of all your stories and this particular collection I really enjoy. Koharu seems like such a obscure character to write about that it's amazing that you've written even six one-shots! But because of that point, seeing that you can produce stories out of so little to work with has really begun to make me look at my writing and cause me to think more openly. (It's a revelation! :P )

Thanks, and I hope you do jot down some more, despite handing Rumiko-sensei's characters back to her--or so your profile says.) As always, wonderful job. :)
Nokomarie the Snake
2006-02-20 . chapter 6
Hum. I liked all of them. I just think there needs to be one last one. About what, I don't know. Koharu does get kind of left to cry her eyes out doesn't she? Perhaps, in later years...
Lucinda the Maid
2005-10-07 . chapter 6
((applauds furiously)) These are excellent! While I've seen many 30-themes fics around here, I would have never expected to find a collection centered around Koharu. Since her character is one that's so difficult to peg down without making her out to be a ditz, as I reached the end of your most recent one, I felt extremely satisfied. Three cheers for spreading the Koharu love!

My favorite drabble so far was your second one. At first, you had me believe that you were referring to Miroku, but you threw me a glorious twist that really gave introspective into her personality and desire to bear Miroku's children. While all were wonderfully done, that one really stood out to me...

Here's hoping you'll write more of these soon! Ja ne!
Reality
2005-08-16 . chapter 6
Very good. ^^
TitianWren
2005-07-23 . chapter 5
To be honest, I never would have expected such deep reflections to come from Koharu. She's always seemed somewhat airheaded to me. Then again, given her background, she's probably a bit more mature than your average fourteen-year-old. And I suppose the whole purpose of you writing these ficlets would be to explore her character at greater depths...

Bonus points for using the word "chattel."
TitianWren
2005-07-23 . chapter 4
I've kind of wondered whether Inuyasha's legend was circulated among humans. It's not a stretch to assume that the story spread throughout the countryside, though.

The "you have me to protect you" line was rather bittersweet, considering the dramatic irony involved. Poor Koharu has no one to protect her, really. Good thing she kept that stick.
TitianWren
2005-07-23 . chapter 3
The oil-merchant's son *deserved* to get beaten with that stick. That's all I'm saying on the matter.
TitianWren
2005-07-23 . chapter 2
I admit it. I fell for your misleading intro and thought that Koharu was reminiscing about Miroku. And here I was certain that I'd learned not to assume that everything is what it seems in your writing. *sulks*

The truth is much more fitting here, though. She does seem like one of those girls that would want a family above all else. Eh, each to her own...
TitianWren
2005-07-23 . chapter 1
Ah! Your Koharu ficlets! I was wondering what had become of this venture. Um... would it be completely obnoxious if I reviewed each one individually?

*is feeling obnoxious*

Ahem. This gives a lovely insight into Koharu's daily life. I especially like how you refer to the oil-merchant's son as Koharu's "two-legged terror," as though he's akin to the boogy-man or something. Nice.
Ouatic-7
2005-07-22 . chapter 4
I like this one a lot. I like how Koharu figures her brother is just giving her the business about the hanyou. And then I like how she wishes to share the "thing" with her brother.
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