Are you sure this is a complete fic? I liked the whole mystery thing and definitely hope that there would be an some sort of end for this.

I really didn't understand your story... sorry, i kinda like it somehow.

Ah?

*twitch* You'd better give the backstory to this.

Good writing...Vagueness is a very interesting tool to use, but I need some info, dammit! *cries* It's too good of a story to leave there. Unless I misinterpreted some of it.

Backstory...?

That was great, sad, but great...Poor Kira, No! Poor Athrun. No! Both Kira and Athrun. I feel so sorry for both of them, and I would really love to know why Kira left. I just want to know what in the world would cause him to go crazy enough to leave Athrun. Well, amazing work and I can't wait for more one-shots. :)

Oh dear. To think the start was so soft and mellow. I think you have a gift for controlling our train of thoughts. What happened to Kira? Why did he leave Athrun? More importantly, is this AU? How old are they now? How long was their relationship before Kira LEFT? Wow... So many questions and I am too impatient to wait. Tell you what, mail me at ellene_j with the answers as soon as possible? Thanks a million.

Qui vive?

Here lives...

Interesting tittle, made me think a bit. As for the plot it is very promising, i hope you update soon.

ur story kicks ass but it was sad i cryed (don't tell anyone ) lol

AACK! WHAT HAPPENNED? T_T

I love your writings as usual, phoenix-san! XD keep it up!

Interesting. It has enough in it to make you continue reading it and not enough to leave you aching for more.

'Qui vive' also means 'here lives..' or 'I live here' in italian.

brill fic.

ah kira died?

and wht? and what and what and what? You just let it hang there! And what happens? Continue please! I love reading your stories. I hope you continue this soon. I really want to know what happens.

Hugs,

HeavenGoddess