Great job! You did the panic attack very well =P

(Overall review) Great story. We all know Misty fears bugs, but also giving her claustrophia adds a more original spin on the girl's phobias. Misty's reasons for being claustrophobic were also quite unique, answering a few questions about her unknown past. My only gripe with this story is that the first chapter kinda' gives a few "surprises" away. Based on Ch.1, alone, I could already tell where this story was going and predicted the ending. But don't get me wrong, I really liked this story, and it did go right to my favorites list, so you can assume I enjoyed it, right?

Aw what a nice story!

I love stories like these; ones that show a character's vulnerable side and give you an insight into their past as well. Great job!

cute story ^.^

i like this one

Wow, that story was really good. And there has to be something like a tragedy in her life that makes her so tough on the outside, but, though she won't tell anyone, she's dying and bleeding inside.

Aw! Fluffy! *chuckles* Yeah, Misty's a real trooper! *grins* Will you write another Pokemon fanfic? PLEASE?

Meh! You're such a good writer! It isn't fair! *grin*

*laugh* That's why I hate sleeping on the bottom bunk!

xD Way too lazy to log in, but that was a brilliant fic. Seriously. *stares* You should write more of these (Pokemon) fics. *grins*

Send me a message if you do! (Sorry I reviewed on the wrong chapter...*coughs*)

oh!I love it!More fic like that!

W...wow. You and I think on the same level. I also believe that there is a lot more to a character than you see on-screen. Just because they're there doesn't mean you know everything about them. Like Ash's dad, or Misty's parents, or what happened to Professor Oak's wife? What about Gary? What's his story?

What are some of the things they absolutely love? Hate? Do they have any fetishes? (I'm not talking sexual). What are their fears? What would they NEVER do in a million years? All their hopes and dreams? There are a lot more things I could think of, but I think you know what I mean.

I also think that something had to have happened to Misty. Either it was her parents death directly, or maybe something to do with her sisters. They didn't/don't treat her very well, don't you agree? They use her like a cat uses a litterbox. I must admit, sometimes it makes me a little ill when I see the show.

I really liked this little story, here. I thought maybe the scene between Ash and Misty could have been...longer, maybe? But it was still sweet, but nothing majorly romantic or anything. Good work, and I mean that doubly, this time.

The only mistake in here is "small" instead of "smell", referring to Misty's shampoo.

Even though this chapter is really short, I liked it. Short, sweet, and to the point. Wow, I really feel sorry for Misty. I would panic. I don't like being in places I can't get out of. Ack. You got all the symptoms right, though, that's for sure. Some people scream and cry hysterically, or just faint dead away! Haha!

Good work!

First of all, title? Awesome. I love love love the quote at the top. I'll save that for future reference. Darn you for your awesome oneshot I read earlier, because I couldn't resist coming to see what other things you might have lying around here. Well, there is an InuYasha piece... I'll probably have to read that one for sure. And several interesting-looking Pokemon fics, too. Some of the summary descriptions looked especially intruiging. This is the oldest one, so I am reading it first.

Dream is great. Well, memory, I'm guessing. But it is a dream, nonetheless. I've seen other people mentioning Misty not like Fire-types, or something, but I was never sure if it ever actually had anything to do with her past, or if it was just a guess, since she loves Water Pokemon. Good thought, there. Poor gal.

I hate gunshots in the middle of the night. UGH! I live way out in the country (well, about a mile or a mile-and-a-half from town, but the town has ONE traffic light, so yeah), and when your window is open, it's like that thing is going off in your ear! Ouch!

Very interesting so far. I like how Misty doesn't want to admit that she's claustrophobic. I wouldn't either.

AWSOME.Write ashs dark secret.