This is dark and the suspence of the exact pairings plagues me. I remember Romero and the fact that you managed to make fan fiction from his apperance in a very interesting way makes me crave your next update.

your work is awesome, but where is the next?
I want the next!
>x<

Wow, never thought you were coming back. But glad to see ya.

This is a really good story and I really want to see how it develops and ends.

And personally... I'm more of a Fayt/Nel person. I hope that is hw it ends, because there just arn't enough. (PLEASE DON'T HIT ME!)

yay!! an update and one step closeer to alnel - i mean albel heehee.

delicious chapter, miriam's intro was well done, i cant wait to see what this leads to

I love this story.
The plot stays interesting and has some nice twists put in there.
I especially like how you keep all of the characters in character - not many people do that, and the people who can, I respect greatly.
It slightly annoys me how I can't tell what the couple is (I'm rooting for albelxnel hehe) but the story stays good throughout, so it doesn't bother me as much as a less well-written fic would.
The fight scenes are nicely written, and I can imagine them actually happening.

This is overall, a real awesome fic, and I am looking forward to seeing the rest of it! I understand that updating stories can be hard and inconvenient(personal experiences), so update when you can, I'm positive that it will be worth the wait!

your no fun ya' stoped in the middle thats no fun what about your fans

please update soon! I like how you continued the story after Albel's ending lol. =)

Heh...interesting. I'm liking this story. But, big thing you should worry about is grammar, a little spelling (like 'starring' instead of 'staring'), and the usage of past-tense, present tense speech--sometimes you switch randomly between the two. Try getting a beta, they are t3h luffness. Or just reread chapters before you post them over and over and over... Also, yay Vampy!Sexy!Romero!

Very good so far.Please write more!!

Please continue! You got a great story going on.

Nel 'killed herself' in the dream to get away from Romero! Go Nel! Ordinarily, I don't really go for suicide as a way to get out of problems - it's way too...permanent - but hey, this was just a 'dream'; plus Nel didn't really have any other options at the time...

I wonder who or what Romero thinks Nel is holding on to, to resist him...duty to Aquaria? Fayt? Albel? Well, whichever one it is, I doubt it bodes well...

Picturing the wave of spiders...*shudder*...it reminds me of the scene in the Harry Potter movie...Usually I don't really mind spiders, but seeing them swarm like that...*shudder* ^_^

And now Nel and Fayt are surprised at the end...I don't know about Fayt, but if it was Albel there (and if he was armed) I think he'd be startled and kind of reflex-swipe the vampire-girl's head off...Of course I suppose that might end the fight too quickly... ;)

Haha...That last line was kinda funny...maybe if it was a movie, then it would have been a bit scary...Anyways, update?

Aha! So Albel IS alive for now...

I was just thinking - too bad Albel's ankles were chained too. If they weren't, maybe he might be able to kick at his tormentors...not that it would do him much good, I suppose. It would probably just amuse them or make them angry...hopefully Succubus will be careless and give him an opportunity to escape. Though of course now Fayt and Nel are captured, too...

Hm...so it seems Romero was asking Albel about Nel even before she came to Airyglyph...I wonder where Romero would have heard about her in the first place...

So, the FW was for a possible Fayt/Welch, then? What a relief! I have to admit that Woltar was the only W-person that was coming to mind for me before this, too...EW, indeed. :)

I can see where you might not want to wait for someone to proofread before putting it in - I myself didn't wait on the third chapter on my story! ;) - And it looks like you usually update on a weekend, which is when I'm not online...Oh well. If you ever change your mind, I'm usually online a good part every weekday and I usually respond really quickly to any emails during that time.

Looking forward to finding some answers to the new questions next chapter! Though you're right - with the answers come more questions...but that's part of why I like questions, anyway. :)

Woot Romero sounds sexy=) Your torturing us by not telling whats gonna happen *cries* Anywayz the chapter was very seductive lol.

(reviewed as May in previous chapter ^^)
This was a good chapter! the characters won't ooc but there was some spelling errors and word swaps, I didn't mind, your good story made up for them!
Anyways, update soon, and poor Albel... look's like Succubus's gonna have some fun. I'm guessing Albel might escape or something along those lines?