It is very very good. I love it!

i love it and can't wait for another chapter to be written

Hello again! Remember me? Jeannette Yu? The one who reviewed your story before? Well yeah...i just reread the story again, im just so hooked on it but the truth is i dont really want to go any farther than this chapter simply because you haven't updated at all and well...its crushing not to know what happens next...so yeah, i hope you update soon, you cant be that busy but if you are, hopefully the real world will give you enough time to write.

Keep writing and good luck with it!

Sincerely Your Reviewer,
~Ophion

It's been a few months since you wrote this, but as I just read it, I wanted to tell you it is very good!! Please continue, the characters and plot both have me captivated!! Thanks for writing!!

No! The story cant stop now! Wah!
...*sniffle* Well, im pretty sure you know what i mean by now...Please update VERY soon! I LOVE your story and its awesome! Your a really goos writer! I write fan-fics myself, but your writing is way better, its like a real book! Im really sorry i didnt reveiw on the other 18 chapters, but i always only review on the last chapter...Just know that yons of peopel read your story and PLEASE keep writing! I hope you get long chapters up again soon and the ending in this chapter is really god, its like a subtle cliffhanger, you want to know what happens next but its not so dramatic that it spoils the event.

Well, sorry i made a really long review but remember, KEEP WRITING!

Sincerely yours,
~The Spinner of Dreams (who loves shannara)

p.s. Happy New Years!

Even after reading nearly all of the other books in the series, Allanon remains to this day my favorite druid. I'd really love to see more of this story, you've got a very interesting past set up for Allanon and his daughter.

i like the way this chapter shows a softer side of allanon. allanon as a school teacher Hmm this should be interesting can't wait to see how this turns out just wondering how many chapters can we expect

Hehe... the sweet 'in your face revenge'! Schoolmaser huh? Allanon backed into somethin? that might turn out intresting, huh? please post more! Don't leave us gain!

And your back!! Yay! This chapter was very intresting... And more mysterys to be reveiled later! Welcome back!

Woohoo! Another update!

I really did enjoy this chapter, especially the cooking/domestic type scenes.

I'll be very interested to know what Andrea's training is like! Please update again when you can. I understand about RL though, so I'll be patient.

Take care,
Shanna

your writing never ceases to amaze me allanon making french toast that was a nice touch. the ending was especially sweet. oh by the way i'm foxgrin I changed it to serrin verres because foxgrin was already taken

I'd like to see chestry make another appearance i think your an all around great writer please update soon!

think you should publish it just change the names please update soon !

when I saw the title I was a little nervous since I had an idea of my own concerning allanon having a daughter but the similarities end there my characters is vary diferent even so i'm really enjoying your story please! update soon

Such a great read! I grew up with Sword of Shannara, and it has been awesome to see somoeone else's point of view. Really cool to see Allanon develop like you have done. He was always a favorite of mine!
Can't wait for the next chapter!