Woah. THis is a pretty good story :D
I look forward to seeing more :DD

This is a rather interesting crossover. But I do wonder when Makoto will get her full Senshi powers back. I hope that it will happen soon. Update please!

Update please! And great fanfic lol

this is just ... wow. When I saw that there were SM/FMA crossovers I was really skeptical, but I'm really glad I picked this one to try first-off. I love how you've done the characters, and the idea for this fic is really interesting. I can't wait to see where you're going with it.

Nice story.

oh, write more soon, but why is makoto 5? and why don't you let her take her transformation yet!? just let it come to her, oh and let her save ed from scar! yeah that would be pretty cool. oh sorry, just to let you know, those are only suggestions, not demands, its your story i have no control. but pleas write more soon.

who's the subject of this story?

This is boring. Extremely.

its a good story! really enjoyable!

You combined two of my favorite animes... THANK YOU! I love it, I love it and I hope that you write more very soon!

Cool! Update when you can! Ja ne!

this is good. i can't wait to read more.

Yay, update! I thought you'd finally given up on it... I'm glad you didn't!

I have been following this story for a long time. I think it's a wonderful concept done well. Even though I have little to no knowledge of the FMA verse (my interest was Mako), you have explained it well enough for me to follow.

In addition to telling you what a good story you have here, I wanted to let you know of a mistake in this chapter. You say in the first paragraph that it has been three days since the storm, but you say that it was only the night before that she had drawn away from the cloaked woman. While I haven't gone back to the previous chapter to check, I'm pretty sure that happened during the storm.

Keep up the good work. I hope you finish this!

I love this!! I can't wait to find out why there is a mini Mako and a seperate Jupiter... Man, Tucker scares me and I see the comparisons the only one I don't get is why chibi-usa's image overplaced Hughes in the previous chapters..

Oh my gosh! I am truly glad that I stumbled upon this story because it's great! Every time I think I might know where you're going with it, you make a complete one eighty! And those are the kind of story's that I love! Please continue this, because I'm dieing to know how you'll end it! ;p