This was so awesome.

The end reminds me of a song, 'Quizas, Quizas, Quizas'(perhaps, perhaps, perhaps). I agree, very pretty purple prose, which is quite suited to Alex.

this is such a great story! considering alex is a hard chara to write, you stayed in chara while describing his last feelings to such a depth T.T thank you so much for writing this

Aww! That was nice. _ Some originality, some purple prose (what can ya do, Alex IS like that); all in all, not bad.

I adore this. I've been browsing all morning (trying to figure out what's going on in different fandoms, heh) and this is the best I've read so far! :) Beautifully done.

Wow. This is a really great short story... Nice job Alphard, truly.

you know that was a good story and i liked it im gonna read more of yer stuff

this is a very very good fiction !I'dliked it very much, I apprecieted specially you've hint to hamilcar and his friend...I hope you'll write other fan fic about last exile.

see you

Yay. I’m glad you lied.

Great one shot, loved the Vanship legend. I think I liked this even more then your other Last Exile fic. Hey, look, progression! Your next LE fic should be just as good, if not better! (Hint, hint). Heh.

Well, I do hope you write more, we could do with some more well written fics here, especially about Alex, Sophia, and Vince.

*crosses fingers*

T_T youre going to start me crying again T_T

This is very poetic...Alex would be thinking exactly this. He is very in character.