Love this story and this end to the series SO much more than the actual show. Great job!

Great story, wish it had been longer and I wish you had continued as it would have been an interesting path for our favorite couple to follow.

Beautifully written,and vastly superior to the 'Abomination'. Thank you!

Just had to read something else of yours tonight... very good, very good indeed. I liked this the first time I read it and continue to enjoy it today.

If the procedure was a success, why say Trip's injuries were too severe? If T'Pol is to be married, and Trip is alive, why say "I grieve with thee"? Confused, please shed some light on this.

Once again, you have created a masterpiece. I haven't seen this story before; don't know how I missed it. You did an excellent job fixing that abortion called "These are the Voyages" and you gave our favorite couple the ending they deserved.

An in incredible finale fix. Wonderful.

wondering is this the end of the story I hope not...

you have Chapter 1..

Nicely done. :)

Agood story, although I discovered it about two years after it was written.

-Lilith Kayden

well done I like this a lot.

Good story! But one niggle: I may just be missing something obvious, but why is Trip's survival (and emigration to Vulcan) kept secret at the end?

I liked the story. It was a unique way to address the injuries at the the end of TATV. It would be interesting to see how this progressed.

No need to be gentle. You did just fine with this story. Excellent job.

And isn't it sad that we can come up with better endings for the show than people that were paid to come up with them?

This story just begs for a sequel. Please write one!