A little confused in the first couple chapters Shannon's father name was richard and Suns fathers last name was know?

Great story! Thanks for finishing it!

I really enjoyed your story. I am trying to blunder my way through mine. Yours gave me a nice break when i was pulling out my hair with frustration. Thank you for writing. I hope that you will write more.

Absolutely love this fan fic! I wish this could be a movie... You have made this story so real and allthough I was alittle sad that you killed Lyle I loved every event in it... Thank you for writing this!

Hi just read chapter 88 of youe story it was a good ending. I have enjoy reading your hole story. And look forward to reading your next story.

Ooh, I love the last lines. This story has been awesome the whole way through. Great job! Thank you for the time put into it and for completing it.

I've read the first part of this story, as well as the last couple chapters but haven't read all of it yet. I hope you'll write more Pretender/Lost x-overs. These are 2 of my top fave tv shows ever!

what season of lost?

Ah! Keep them coming. All these revelations are making me crazy... but in a good way. I love what you're done with this story so far. Please update soon.

Hi

OH WOW! This story has more twist and turns in it I love it please write more chapter.

Oh can't wait to find out what 'the plan' is!

I read it-all of the last 10 chapters. They were good!

Great story! I usually don't mention spelling, punctuation, or grammar errors, but the frequency and nature of the errors interfered with the meaning of the sentences. On the other hand, it is obvious that the author put much effort into the writing of this story, and I hope to see more of the same in the near future.

Oh..I missed this. I'm again reconnecting with things related to the Pretender. Re-reading some stuff again. And I'm glad you kept this story going. Hope to see what you have in mind for the finale!

Never a need to apologize for new chapters I say keep 'em coming for this great story!