wow that was amazing i really get it the inside peak of the gimore girls so great job this story was awsome!

Happy Holidays!

Wow... that could have actually been a real scene from that episode! Great job!

This scene was absolutely called for. And I believe that the only reason we weren't shown this side of the coin, was because the creators of the show themselves weren't that certain whether Mitchum H. was actually being the jerk that he was.

They wanted to leave that up to us for interpretation.

But I strongly believe that the above was the scene that occured out of sight.

Good job in bringing it to us! :)

Hey you.

Very realistic. I'd better watch my memory; I might start looking back on this as being an actual part of the show!

fitting, i see where it would work.

this is really unique!

thanks, deni :)

Oh, very intriguing! I love it! Please update! :)

Well, this is very different, original. I never thought of it that way, maybe that's actually what happened, I mean, it makes sense. It kind of sounds like they're ploting some kind of evil plan in which to destroy the world. Hmm...I like.

Yeah, that's exactly what that scene would go like, the bastards!

Honestly?

I just skimmed it, 'cause I'm a bad girl, but it really explains why Mitchum did what he did, and here I was thinking he was being true! Nice dialouge, I don't know if you copied it exactly or not, but I could have used a little more description of the place time and what everyone was doing. Maybe a little more of a peek into their evil minds. This is better written as a script, but I really enjoyed.

glad to see someone else was suspicious of mitchums motivation in putting rory down the way he did. very interesting fic. i love looking into possibilities and what ifs. are you going to continue writing this? or is this just a singular piece?

i love it, i can actually see this being the reason behind him firing her, it fits! lol, good job

We're on the same wavelength, you and I... that's what I thought about Mitchum's offer, and it seems to be working.

Agree! If that actually didn't happen "off-screen", I'll eat my hat! Not that I normally wear a hat, but I do when it's cold, or if it's a particularly cute hat, but still, I'll eat it!

Even though you aren't a big Logan gal (which I can forgive you for), you certainly do seem to be able to get into any character's head and give us a pleasurable read. This was no exception.

I can just see them in this evil lair of a brandy-drinking room, rubbing their fingers together like Mr. Burns on the Simpsons (Excellent). And might I add, for your first non-Trory, it's nice to see you step out of the HA realm. If just for a moment. Gives me hope I might corrupt you into other ships. Ah, to dream.

For an end to this behemoth of a review, I say, it's wonderful. A great one-shot ficlet.

You know I so agree.

There is something wicked brewing and it can't always be good when it comes to the Huntzbergers...

~M

Glad to have you back!