This is such an intriguing story, but PLEASE update!!

Oh come on LIVE!! *pokes this story with a fic* You can't be dead yet.



Jesus loves you.

The jumping of her thoughts are so much fun to follow. I love it when people explore the slight psychotic side of Nova, it has me grinning more often the not. Some parts had me rolling my eyes but more often then not this was fun to read

wtf...i mean i am LIKING this fic very much but whoa that's a weird idea u got...hahaha although i LOVE Hikaru/Umi...or is it Nova/Umi...GAH well i do hope it's a Hikaru/Umi ^_^ or Nova...whatever hahaha love Nova ^^ hahaha update son

Hey, interesting story. I'd like to see where you're taking this.

Very nice :) In my opinion the great improvement I was looking for as a pose to the first chapter, and I stand impressed. I look forward to future chapters with hopes they come soon.

Hey I enjoyed the concept of your story with some fine tuning I think it could be really cool. If you haven't abandoned this sory, I'd love to see an update-(Soon?)
Thanks for the read. ^-^

Very intriguing, and something I hadn't even considered, even as a devout Rayearth fan. My compliments to the plot idea, and I can't wait to see more of your work.

Perhaps my only critisism would be the raw descriptive work, but that's just my own taste. I tend to be the in-depth reader, and enjoy when an author takes special consideration to detail as far as description of places, characters, events, ect. I'm not at all saying you're lacking, so please don't dismiss my idea as insult, just voicing consern on an otherwise brilliant piece. Thanks for letting me ramble, and again, I can't wait for your future entries on this piece.

Well you updated, that's a relieve. But I still feel sad cuz I am the only one reviewing. Hm, maybe I should pick a guy up a 20-stories building and say :"Now you review this story or I let go." :p

Anyways great work on the update but I still dun get the main storyline behind this though...

Nice story, keep it up. I'll be supporting you. :)