I hope you know enough Spanish for Mas y Menos.

This has been... interesting. Both good and bad in certain areas. You made Zuko and Slade too childish though. That's my only complaint. Especially on Slade. But, your characterizations of Aang and the Titans are really well done thusfar. I personally can't wait to see more. You've done well, and I can't wait to see how you continue this. Well done.(Though, I still really hope you make it BB/Rae.)

I HATE having to log in to review. Anyways, very nicely done thusfar. I'll check the second chapter soon and give a more thorough review. For now though, I see you don't seem to like BB/Rae very much.;( Well, I thought I could tell you some really good ones based on that pairing that might change your mind.;) BlueTitan's fics are very good. Demigod's "An Empath's Burden" and "Seven Years' Bad Luck in One Day" are really good. I forgot who did it, but "Cupboard Love" is also a great one.

Anyways, if you could, could you please read them? I'd really like this fic if you could make it BB/Rae as well, and if you read those, they might help ya with some inspiration._

This is an excellent fic...very well written and very descriptive! I like how you explained the meeting and what was said instead of saying "they got to know eachother last night." Sorry I can't stand it when people don't describe something to the fullest! I'll be eagerly awaiting chapter 2!

wuh bye

fatcat

This is so much better than the crossover I made...mine was so lame. BUT THIS IS SO GOOD! UPDATE PLEEAASSEE before San Fransisco trip rolls around. .