 KateLilly 11/10/05 . chapter 1I like it |
 clarkson04 8/29/05 . chapter 6hurry write more |
 Lostaway 8/27/05 . chapter 6 Awesome! I loved how you incorporated the song into the chapter! |
 Darkwing333 8/14/05 . chapter 6okay so i can't wait to see what will happen. Is Alex seeing this guy with her sixth sense or is he really there and someone is impersonating him. Oh no, please write more soon! |
 Chris Anthony 8/9/05 . chapter 6Woah...what a twist! I defintely didn't see that coming...woah, but that was a great chapter...i am so glad that Jack and Kate finally made up! And including the song "Stand by Me" added a nice touch. Great job! |
 Chris Anthony 8/9/05 . chapter 5Sorry it took me so long to review! I had to finish reading this story before I jumped into the latest! Excellent chapter...and Poor Jack and Kate! |
 Charlie-fan 8/5/05 . chapter 6 oh, i like it! the song you used was great too... |
 lostaway 8/5/05 . chapter 6 really good chapter. yay for jate! the fluff rocks...update soon! |
 CrAzYhOrSeGiRl88 8/5/05 . chapter 6That was SO awesome! Really, you did an incredible job with this one. I think that the song lyrics really light up the chapter and I really think they give it the effect that you want. I love how you placed them and really the whole structure of the chapter itself is great. I love how you did everything here and of course I loved the Jate scene! _ |
 Whirlwind421 8/5/05 . chapter 6Woh, creepy! Alex was talking to a ghost. I like the song you put into the story. How do you choose a song?
Do you choose the song and write the story to fit or find the right song? I'm glad Kate and Jack got back together! |
 CrAzYhOrSeGiRl88 8/5/05 . chapter 5another awesome chapter! i'm SO sorry that it took me so long to read your past 2 chapters. like i've told you on AIM, i've been really busy and i haven't even been home for most of the time. i really love how the fight between kate and jack is going. you've got them nicely in character and everything seems to be tying together. i really love it! _ |
 CrAzYhOrSeGiRl88 8/5/05 . chapter 4omg, great chapter! i can't believe it took me this long to finally read it! its incredibly well written and as always i love how the plot is moving along. really though, you should give yourself more credit for it. you were the one who pulled it off! anyway, it was awesome! _ |
 Chris Anthony 8/2/05 . chapter 4Great chapter. Poor Jack and Kate, but they needed this. A little fight and misunderstanding to realize how much they love each other...I also like Kate and Sawyer's interaction. Great Job |
 Whirlwind421 8/2/05 . chapter 5Poor Alex and Shannon! Jack really is acting seven years old and his best friend wants to play with other people to. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope you get over writers block soon. |
 Whirlwind421 7/30/05 . chapter 4Poor Jack thinks Sawyer and Kate are flirting. I just think it is all in Jack's head. Interesting back story for Alex. I think the makeup will be S and S, the breakup J and K and the heartache will be Alex. Can't wait for more! |