that was really good! i love that pairing and i thought the plot was very real and interesting. good job!

God, that was beautiful. It almost made me cry. That was utterly fab. Well done. No improvement necessery x

hey there! don't worry! i don't like to give nasty comments...i'll only do that if the fic is really bad. it's my 1st time to actually give a review on a fanfic & i assure ypu there's no harry potter movie or book that's been released and published that i haven't seen. ok, i like your story and i hope you'll create more of these...it's romantic! can't write much...that's all xoxo! keep up the good literary work!

one word aw!

Lupin/Tonks perfection... Wonderful

heheheheh! Very cute! Love it!!

Aw!! cute!!

Arggh!! *swoons in delight* you made me SMILE here! =)

Now it was Remus turn to look out over the water and then he softly spoke: “I don’t love you, Tonks.”

Tonks’s eyes began to fill themselves with tears. “Look at me when you say it.” It came out half a sob, half a plea.

Remus turned and looked at her. “I … I … I can’t, I can’t tell you that, when it’s not true.” He whispered.

Whe!!

a really sweet story, both of them perfectly in character loved it.
i always wanted to see that scene, i didn't like the way rowling did the remus and tonks pairing- its just like she didnt want to fill up too much space so just shoved in a sentance at the end which led you to believe they were together.

"Remus Lupin had been making his way over to Tonks room, when he turned the corner and bumped into someone. He was about to tell the person he’d bumped into, to look where he was going, when he noticed the person had fallen to the ground. He looked down and saw it had been her. He knelt down and asked her if she was alright."

i think that paragraph needs a bit of work though, a badly written extract can distract from the reading a little. and isnt one of those "he"'s supposed to be a she?

aw! the fics just keep getting better!! wow this one is as close as what i imagined it to be in the book. i love fics that fill in the space after the hospital wing incident.. :)

good job!!

aww...how sweet...I've been shipping for Tonks and Remus for a while, but I've never seen Jo really insinuate anything between them until now. It made me so happy when I read that part of HBP. Good story.

These RT fics are so addictive! @_@
Anyway, I loved your take on things in this. I kind of wondered what happened between what happened in the hospital wing and the funeral...
Anyway, wonderful job. This was really cute. ^_^

Awe, that was really cute. And I was pleased to see they (Tonks and Remus) were both in character. There were a few grammatical errors, like a period instead of a comma after the dialogue, but it wasn't so bad that my eyes watered and I had to step out of the room. =) And I really like the title, it's what caught my attention.

-Ali

*Claps hands* Terrific! Wonderfully written. I guess I have to get over the fact that I'm not a character in the book now? Lol-great one-shot!

Wow, so gorgeous! It's put a lovely big smile on my face, because nothing makes me happier than one of my favourite 'ships working it out and getting together. Thank you very much for writing this! I think it was very well written on the whole, despite a few minor grammatical errors. Anyway, I liked the use of quotes from the novel (MY FAVOURITE PART!) and you kept the characters pretty much true to themselves, so well done. Nice fic!