M...very, very good storytelling, you're certainly a talented author. However, I thought it sounded more like Milhouse being accused of killing Bart (mybe when they're older if you want). You know, Milhouse never trusting himself, low self-esteem, always exploited by Bart without Bart ever realizing it. And I just think that writing this story with well-developed characters instead of one-dimensional comic relief ones would make a more Simpson-y story. Of course, if your intent was also to develop Dolph, that completely different, but I just thought I'd point out an alternate version. Really great story though, a rarity in in the Simpsons section.

That. Was. AWESOME.

It wasn't Simpsons (too angsty for simpsons) but still INCREDIBLY kickass. Congrats.

I...I really love this story. It is so much darker than the normal Springfield attitude but it fits so perfectly well. I love the whole stylistic writing at the beginning. It was so beautifully written. At times I felt as if it was going into the normal angst but you kept it up into one of the best Simpsons fanfictions I've read in a LONG time.

Thank you so much for this. Just SQUEE! I'm going into fangirl mode. I really just applaud you. This story is quite fantastic

This really was fantastic, Nicole. You added so much depth to Dolph- which is really hard, as the bully gang always was made so one-dimentional (besides Nelson). I loved this. I really did.

I can't wait to see more of your stuff!

-Nicole

O.O...that...was awesome.