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| I never promised 2006-11-02 ch 1,  | abuseoh my, i loved it, i very much enjoyed it |
| avalon88 2006-04-03 ch 1, | abuseThis story was marvousely well written. I hope you write other stories. |
| singingstarryknights 2005-11-28 ch 1, | abuseI LOVED this. perfect characterization. whoa. just lovely. |
| freak4jesus 2005-08-09 ch 1, | abuseshort a sweet, just what I needed^_^ |
| stracy 2005-07-28 ch 1, | abuseI know you said the end, but I'd really enjoy reading more. I'd like to see how the relationship ends up and what made Sara take Greg up on his offer, and maybe what made her come to her decision that she did love Greg. |
| ObessedTWFan 2005-07-26 ch 1, | abuseI love it!, It's soo cute! |
| MKL 2005-07-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseoverall, the story is good, but I'm having problems with two sentences. "Ever since he had first met her, he had been memorized." And "Greg wasn’t sure what it was about her that memorized him the most." Now, maybe it's just me but they don't make much sense to me. Don't you mean "MESMERIZED" not memorized?? (memorize - to remember, mesmerize - to awe, captivate) anyways, just a little thing. Aside from that everything's just lovely. Keep up the good work. MKL. P.S. is a great friend of writers! :-) |
| chibigirl626 2005-07-25 ch 1, | abuse*sniff* *sniff* *sobs* SO SWEET! |
| missusmesser 2005-07-25 ch 1, | abuseAW OMG THAT WAS SO CUTE! more greg and sara! More! |
| Sugar Pill 2005-07-24 ch 1, | abuseAww, this was sweet. But it wasn't all fluff... which made it very believable. ;) Nice job! |
| saraluver 2005-07-24 ch 1, | abusethat was so sweet! |
| Jenny70529 2005-07-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw, how sweet... I love mushy stuff sometimes! :-) You're the best writer there is...what a great way to end the weekend! lol. You're amazing. Jenny |
| SpeedRacer15 2005-07-24 ch 1, | abuseVery cute. Just one little thing, about a third of the way through it you said greg had been memorized, I think you meant mezmerized. |
| Padfoot4ever 2005-07-24 ch 1, | abuseGreat job! |
| SLynn 2005-07-24 ch 1, | abuseVery lovely! :) |